All Comments on 'Alice Screams Ch. 06'

I liked the story very much, it was super interesting and totally new for me. I may have to prowl along some more sci fi stories now.

Thank you

Love that Alice got to get even, and it was an interesting series, though so far I've loved the bdsm and scifi elements of your work, the sex could use Alost better and more writing, will keep reading your work for the bdsm and SciFi and hope your later works improve on the sex.

But you need to add a little more sexuality to your story. And a little more bdsm would not hurt any. Keeping these things in mind, please continue writing.

How about a couple of more chapters