All Comments on 'Alicia Ch. 02'

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DryhillDryhillover 12 years ago
STILL GOOD

It is still early days in the story and the relationship between the two charaters, so it hard to tell if i am going to really enjoy this story. So far all looks promising.

sober71sober71about 8 years ago
Hooked

You hooked me with part 1 then you gave us Pt2. I have been in charge most of my life and dream of relinquishing all responsibility to a mistress to use me as she wished, I long to be spanked and used.

Off to read Pt 3.

ZakfarZakfarover 5 years ago

Man... you really weakened the entire buildup with Phillip asking Alicia to spank him, and instantly transforming the story arc into kink play by him calling her 'Mistress'. It should have come up naturally and the build-up should have been very slow.

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