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"Well, you've had the pain. Now, you get the pleasure," she said. She lay down on her side facing me, her face at the level of my still-hard cock. Then, once again, she took me into her mouth and began sucking me ardently.
I groaned in exquisite pleasure-pain and said, "Oh, mistress!"
She took her mouth off me momentarily and said, "Phillip, I want your semen in my mouth tonight. Understand?"
"Yes, Mistress," I gasped.
Once again, she bent to her task, and I was enveloped in a red mist that contained all the pleasure and pain in the world. I lived inside the mist with the one person who understood and willingly provided me with the pain and pleasure that I craved. I gently touched Alicia's hair, stroking it. I believe that she liked it, for I heard her gurgle in pleasure.
She threw her arm over my body and ran her hand over my sore buttocks and flanks, causing little eruptions of pain wherever she touched. The intensity of the two sensations was more than I could bear. I was suddenly crying out my mistress' name, confessing my love for her, and spurting my come into her hungry, waiting mouth.
Alicia drank every last drop of my sperm, and sucked me for more, until I was totally drained. Then she crawled up beside of me and covered my mouth with hers. I tasted my come mixed with her saliva and drank it like the gift from her that it was.
"I love you, my mistress, I love you," I said, fresh tears running down my face.
"I know, I know," she said, cradling me gently in her arms. "I love you too, Phillip."
She let me drift off to sleep for a while, but then woke me up later, for the second act in the night's performance.
- COMMENTS
Zakfarover 5 years agoDon't get it wrong. You surely are writing very well. The issue the is that you're weakening the build-up and flow yourself by suddenly introducing something that should have been waited till the later part (like introduction of spanking and calling 'Mistress') and then slowing down the later parts just by neglecting the crucial details. They're together for 1 month. The first month is the most important month. They didn't have sex in that period, and then didn't have spanking sessions either. So what exactly were they doing while living together? This is the time when their build-up gets stronger, and you have just skipped the most important part. This story is already written, but I hope if you read this you can do better in your future writing.
