All Comments on 'Alien Abduction'

by TempestLeFleur

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Heh

liked the ending "Never can tell with heather"

not bad for a 1Shot. It wouldn't have been difficult to run this as a series, but sometimes quick and painful has it's place.

Some will downvote due to length but really, as a one-shot, it's exactly what it's supposed to be

5*s

TempestLeFleurTempestLeFleuralmost 8 years agoAuthor
Heh

Thank you for your constructive feedback regarding the length of the story and that you enjoyed it (and for voting) It was very much appreciated.

The storyline has been left open so there may be further adventures for the characters in the future.

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