All Comments on 'Alien Mine Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

It continues to be a great story, hope to be able to read lots more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story plot and characters. The battles are well done.

It is an erotic story thus the inclusion of lots of sex and every human resource after Rhys is a sexy female. Sex as the method of implanting Bobs is the justification. It frustrates me as I read the story that maybe thousands of Om are on Earth and possibly billions are on the way and the author has added four women to help MC. And the spend so much time fucking.

It would be more interesting in the future plot to add more men on the team. This would be more complex relationships and emotions even with Rhys as number one. Don’t be a lazy author put some interesting conflict into the team and not just MC’s cock and pussy licking. One more chapter of that will get really boring.

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