All Comments on 'Aliens'

Good start got weird with that last page

Alien-induced TF shenanigans are a common enough premise; -multiple- abductions equivalent to a group of medical professionals arguing over each other is definitely original though. XD

The story itself feels like squandered potential. Aaron's reorientation to Erin is paced alright, but the subsequent abductions read like a fetish parade with only threadbare continuity, and the centipede finale is just flat-out bizarre. Were each stage fleshed out into a full chapter that explored the kink in depth, the story would be a lot stronger; as it is now, it's basically a slideshow of disconnected vignettes.

Loved the story. Was well written and would love to read some more! All those alien abductions was a hoot!! You have a very talented and inventive mind, as I already said would love to see a continuation of the story! Keep up the amazing writing.