All Comments on 'Aliens Ch. 01'

This was a great story and I hope you continue it. Your Imagination & detail to the story was remarkable. So detailed I pictured it like a video/movie... with sound LOL

This is what I have been looking for ! Excellent clinical erotica !! Best I have read in ages

Jack

I get that there is a clinical science experiment going on and the aliens would want similar results from each part but your descriptors of the peoples responses and their vocalizations are repetitive. Could be a real turn on if those pieces didn't come across as so fake and scripted... 3 stars, needs some work.

From the words used and the fact that ONLY John was sodomized that Chinookwind is either a woman or an effeminate male