All Comments on 'Alina'

A little short but very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Damn - that was hot. Was over too quick, though.

What kind of Frat Boy Trailer Park story is this?!

The believability was NEVER there and it all just came off like some teenager's masturbation fantasy.

I've been wondering if/when you would add to the large numbers of excellent stories in your collection. Sadly, this one didn't do it for me, sorry

I gave you five stars because It was pretty hot, but it was also a bit confusing. I’m not sure if you got the names mixed up or not, but it was not clear who was writing who part of the time.

5*

Tc

Hot and fast! Chapter 2?

You cannot tell the players without a score card!

What a fantastic imagination you have . . . And you put it on paper vividly.

Need to keep the names straight, very confusing,

Not a very good story gave it a 3 there was not enough information about the family you need to continue and explain what is going on, and I think you mixed up some names!!!!!!!!!!!