All Comments on 'Alina's Tale: Outcasts Ch. 01'

by bellablanche

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clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycover 10 years ago
Excellent

Would love to see more. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
4 stars. more please.

Would really enjoy reading more. You have a few typos but nothing major.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
GOOD START

very nice begining, love to see you continue the "tail"

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Surprised!

I'm just surprised that this obvious bestiality made it passed the Lit. censors.

Sid0604Sid0604almost 10 years ago
Thank you...

I enjoyed reading your story and I hope there is much more. A great first story. Thank you for sharing.

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