All Comments on 'Alison's Birthday Gift'

Cuck shit. Put it where it belongs in the fetish category. Cuckoldry is a fetish after all.

Scores 1/5

All the husband that act like this asshole should just killed them self it would make this world a better place

Disgusting ! 1*

Very sorry cuckold/slut story. No feeling or emotions in this pathetic birthday bullsh*t tale. It's apparent that he is a stupid willing wimp... Don't bother unless you're into slut/cuckold crap....... But must give you 1 star for no misspellings and proper punctuation.

You are fucked up. This is a nightmare not a fantasy. What is with you fucked up wimp cucks.

Yuck

1 star. Why do people want to write cuck stories? Is it part of their lives? Just a load of crap.

Yeowch yuckkkk

Lousy fantasy. I'll never understand a husband wanted to share his wife. What if the other guy has a much bigger, far more satisfying dick? What if the other guy has a lot more money? What if the other guy just "does it" for your wife? Are you really willing to lose your wife for maybe 15 minutes of sexual fun? Stupid trade unless your plan really IS to get rid of your wife.

Well I would have given this one 6 Stars if possible. I especially enjoy "first-time" stories and this was a doozy!

He's a true cuck and has found his place giving his wifes tight pussy to a big cock alpha. When Bradley returns he will repeat his wifes words telling him that his wifes pussy now belongs to him.

Level 5 crap.

It cracks me up reading all the internet tough guys losing their minds over an internet fantasy. Nothing says beta bitch male like a guy crying over a fucking story, ha.

Amazing how the other gay men come here to live out their pathetic small dicked fantasies about big cocks....we get it nancy's you're dying to get driven by some dude.

Sorry kids, there i sliterally no such thing as an "Alpha" but there IS Omegas and thats where you fall into line, Omegas tend to be feminine, sissies and or bi/gay. Now accept yourself and you dont have to live through some horribly written stories, you can find get that cock for real.

So why was she crying about what she did? Should be tears of joy! She has a big dick lover and a husband for financial support. Hubby will someday baby sit too. She has it made.

Another ridiculous cuck story. No one, except a very sick fool, would want this for a birthday.

100 stars to writer for one of the most exciting fantasy stories yet. Good job you really caught the emotio s of wife Shari g. It isn't any fun or as exciting of the lover isn't a great fuck.

Another turd flying into LW! 1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

Yes, I love doing that for my husband. And for me!

This was good. It was different. Not some patterned plot. Well told. Nicely written. I appreciated it even as a mostly dominant woman. I liked the way you probed Alison's character the most. The husband/narrator was good, too.

Is it a case of “be careful what you wish for”? By the end of it they both seemed happy with it which is all that matters. I’m not a fan of the alphahole interloper type. There’s nothing wrong with enjoying someone else fuck your partner IF that’s what you both want.

Re: the anti cuckold comments, seriously? It was included in the Tags.

Thanks for sharing Tess (uk)

An erotic tale, wonderfully written. Thank you, and please continue to write for those of us who appreciate your skills, and your ability to convey the conflicted feelings of husbands of reluctant, but hot wives.

Great story, in its genre.

"Not sure whether to run streaming out of the closet..." Streaming? Of course you meant "screaming", and I wouldn't have mentioned it, if not for all the other errors, like missing words, etc. This story is too good, and deserved a proofreading. Thanks.

Totally unbelievable. no worthwhile characters, merely stupid shitheads humiliating themselves and each other. Stick to your day job and have a sex change op. You are a slut in so many ways.

So hot and nice, I read and enjoyed it twice! However, the remark about needing proofreading is valid given the typographical errors.

This was great fun. Should do some more episodes with Bradley.

Still one of the most erotically written stories I've ever read. I hope you haven't given up writing, and especially that you haven't given up writing about this hot couple.

Your readers still hope for a chapter 2 to this one. A good wife going from "a little slutty" to a submissive whore for another man is SO hot. Thanks for considering a continuation of this one!

Still 100 stars! for one of the very hottest stories on Lit,, The Alpha Male, completely seduces a wife, destroying her tight pussy for her husband, Hubby humiliated beyond any thing he's known before, his wife, his marriage, and his life as he knows it are all destoyed but hubby is too turned on to realize it. His wife has lost all respect for him, he has lost her, she just hasn't kicked him to the curb yet, so he doesn't realize it. Great Writing. What an amazing writer. You really capture the emotions of the people you are writing about! I am shocked at how powerful your writing is. Thanks, Buster2U

cuckolding yes. Creampie yes. The verbal bull shit no.

Very hot and erotic. One of the best I've read here. Aside from the missing words, it was very well written. Needed a good proofreading. 5 stars anyway

Very hot until the husband came out of the closet. Before that it was a great wife-sharing stroker. She couldn’t resist his big cock and got the fucking of her life. After he came out of the closet, husband turned into a submissive cum licker.

The story is a free erotic short story published on a public and mostly anonymous website. There are some mean and harsh critiques of it. They are undeserved. This checks all the boxes of what someone who is into this kind of kink of behavior would want to read without an actual checklist. Could it be better? Yes. Anyone who is going to try to get their truck fixed themselves is going to know 30 seconds in to check the battery leads. Nobody would leave their wife at a bar getting drunk and waiting to have sex without borrowing a car or getting an Uber/cab. No hotel I’ve ever been in has a closet large enough to be in for that long not is it quiet enough in a room that someone in the room wouldn’t notice someone in the closet.

That said, there’s 2 pages for character/plot development and the actual climax of the plot/resolution. In the amount of words used, this is undoubtedly a very erotic story that was pleasingly written. It earns a deserving 5 stars from me.

I hope to see a follow up of “Alison’s Anniversary Gift” or something where the characters are developed further slightly and a new experience unfolds for them eventually.

Nicely executed story.