All Comments on 'Alistaire Too Ch. 06: Graduation'

It just keeps on getting better

Please do an Alistaire reunion special too! Am absolutely floored by these chapters, and how prolific their releases were. They were my first exposure to your work. Looking forward to more, and will be reading the rest of your stories in the meantime. Thanks!

Okay. So I know you want to take a break from the character, and I get it, but you left us with two very obvious future opportunities. A foursome with the twins and Carrie, which bigger group sex is huge, and the mother/daughter threesome with Sloane and Poppy. If the story ended after that, I feel like I'd be very satisfied, but those two tales need to be told.

I absolutely love this series.

Ah, no, you have the three young ladies back home awaiting for him to return and congratulate each other for graduating and initiating Alistaire's adventures and courage to boldly go where he had not been able to go before. Particuarly with Carrie, she deserves much attention by Alistaire when he gets back home for the summer......... Just sayin... :-)

Thank you. I asked for Nancy Green at the leaving party and you delivered.

Probably best to leave this for now. The best bit was always the new conquest. Going home to 3 girls he's already been with would be a let down

Awesome as usual. And I knew Nancy had to happen!! I can see the looks on the girls faces when she walks off at the end!! Too good. Thanks!!

If that's the last one for a while, it was a great ending. I do hope you get back to him someday

Love the theme and story line looking forward to him getting back home

A brilliant series as usual. Hopefully Alistaire's story doesn't end here. Minor note: this series in particular could do with more proofreading.

What a great ending. I really enjoyed the serie.

Loved this series and the prequel. Thanks for the effort.

By popular acclaim, Alistaire’s Summer Holiday has to be done.

Please start a Patreon account. Would be happy to donate for more Alistaire

So good that I had to read it a second time.

I have to agree with Ladygrey69, that ending was awesome.

And generously garnished with erotic character development.

Great series legendary. I would have liked to see his friends response to the last kiss.

A great and fabulous series. Thank you.

I can totally imagine him cutting a wide swath through the girls (and a faculty member or two?) when gets to college. There might also be some interesting reunions when everyone comes home for Xmas :-)

Alistair is a legend, and so are you. Well crafted, very very funny and hot as hell! Great story and masterful dialogues! Fantastic…

Binged this entire series and it has been lots of fun! Good luck writing in the future👍🏾

Totally satisfying ending, YOU are the legend.

poppy and mum threesome, Mary Maddie and Carrie threesome,alistaire and his dad doubleteam his mum. alistaire discovers anal i can see a bunch of sequel possibilities here

"My eyes must have been wide as saucers. I stared at her in shock. And I honestly was still 'sacred' somehow."

He was sacred? I didn't see even a hint of godliness or even religion in the entire story and then your main character was sacred?

You’re got a great talent for this type of story. You’ve obviously left hooks for at least two post graduation summertime sequels: Mary, Maddie, and Carrie threesomes or foursome at home; Poppy & her mom threesome at the beach. Please don’t make us wait too long!

Gripping story line with an outstanding finish.

Very well done, and after all those couplings, you kept the story fresh and varied. The telling never seemed repetitious. I personally was disappointed that no one ever experimented with anal play. I know, considering Alistair's sizable endowment, that full-on anal sex might have been intimidating for the girls, but a bit of back door fingering and kissing could have been very stimulating. Anyway, I consistently gave you five stars, and I intend to read more of your stories.

Just read all the Al episodes back to back. Enjoyed it. Great work!

Great story, nice twists, good plot and well written. Enjoyed this series very much. Please continue. There are so many options. We as audience are not done with Alistaire yet. Not by far....

So thumbs up and hoping for more... much more....

Thank you for a good story, filled with likeable characters. Keep it up :)

Amazing stories, and I’d be interested in reading how his summer goes.

If you ever publish this though, I caught one discontinuity: when he cleans up you wrote “Having washed my face and hands throughly, and even sponging around in my underwear,” … but said earlier that he had gone commando

I've just read all Al's stories. Gotta say, they are great. Need to find out what happens when he goes to Uni!!

Oh, there needs to be another series with Alistaire! I need to hear about his return home and the beach trip with Poppy and Sloane, please.

Thank you for a very fine couple of series. The twelve episodes made for a rollicking journey through a captivating character's watershed. You telegraphed that Alistaire and Ms. Green would encounter each other at some point, but you sprung it on us in the finale brilliantly.

While I acknowledge that your readers owe it to you to suspend disbelief, it strains credulity that in this unnamed spot in New England the path-side benches would be sufficiently clear of leaves, twigs, dirt, bird poop, and other debris so that two lovers would sit on one bare-assed in the moonlit darkness. And that this parkland grove would be free of mosquitos?

Your inventiveness seems boundless. Like others who have commented before me, I would welcome extending the narrative to the summer break, where Alistaire could resume with Carrie and the twins, and then on to USC. But I can understand and sympathize if you have no further creative juices to invest in Alistaire.

I have consistently rated your episoldes as 5-star. You are a superior writer. In the spirit of constructive criticism, I offer the following points as holding you back from the status of superlative:

* As I've noted twice before, your craftsmanship would benefit from the input of a competent proofreader. A recent, glaring example is "wonton" in lieu of "wanton." You seem to rely on auto-correct overmuch.

* You should master the difference between the intransitive verb "rise" (rise/rose/risen) and the transitive verb "raise" (raise/raised/raised). Oddly enough, I did not notice the same affliction with respect to "lie" (lie/lay/lain) versus "lay" (lay/laid/laid). In a similar vein, the past tense of "lead" is "led."

Post-script: I just reread your standard opening disclaimer. Your standard is "plausibly ridiculous" and with that in mind, I withdraw my objections to the clean bench and the absence of mosquitos. Those were two elements that, at the time I read the piece, just reached beyond the limit of my credulity. But you forewarned me and clearly stated your objective; I should have stretched the range of my credulity to suit your standard.

I see now that my objections were on the same order as complaining that none of Alistaire's multiple fuck-buddies ever had to put off a tryst (or even make an accommodation) on account of her monthly period. Such things just don't happen in the Literotica universes.

Don’t quit now!

Yes definitely a legend. A great fun read.

Great job and fun read. I would enjoy reading more tales of the summer and freshman year. Thanks for sharing.

Stunningly fantastic. Hyperbole is inadequate. Thank you.

Awesome

You nailed the landing. Thanks for a great tale. 5/5*

So creative, droll and so very graphically hot and so skillfully spun out. Let’s fast forward about 15 years and reunion time. Of all the female supervisory council, his true love is the fiery and intelligent Bridget. They should have found a way to get together permanently, one way or another

Thanks for leaving a smile on my face. Great work!!!!!

Nice job well written and really fun to read. Thank you. I see a bunch of stories available when he goes to USC. California girls, usc cheerleaders are hot, first anal, there is four years of college. Spring break at the beach with poppy and her mom, maybe a reunion or two with old friends. Just saying.

I do hope you will please an awful lot of readers, including myself, by coming back to this series at some point in the future. Excellently written, hugely entertaining, hot as Hades and just really funny. Like others I've noticed a few typos, but it didn't spoil my enjoyment although a good proof read would eliminate those and raise the enjoyment level. Wish I could write this well. Kudos to you, indeed you are a legend on here. Keep it up please, please, please. BardnotBard.

I don’t think there is anyone outside of the u$¢ family that likes u$¢. As other denizens of southern California tell, you can’t spell scum without USC. (Brought to you by NorCal vs SoCal and PAC-12 rivalries.)

Oh yes! That ending rates 6 stars at least!

A brilliant culmination!

(Being a Brit. I don’t know if that is an SAT word though).

Awesome!!

College years pleeeease!!!! Too good not to continue

I hate to see this series end, also...it has been a fun ride for all these chapters...

The comments about a future installment about college/California living/summer Before going to USC...the girls at home...??????

Five**5**Stars...again...and AGAIN!!!🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉💯

A truly phenomenal set of stories, you kept the storylines going and they didn’t get stale or bog down at any point, your self deprecating humour regarding SAT vocab inclusion has made me wonder if you have spent time at a boarding school as more than a student, maybe?

My heartfelt thanks for both writing and posting here on Lit, best wishes PurpleFizz.

Thank you for your particularly delightful take on the 'Shy Nerd Harem' sub genre Publius68. I'd love to read more, but I can't imagine how you'd top a finish like that!

Top notch, entertaining, well written, and sexy. I have been binging on the entire series and found the story immensely entertaining. Perfect ending, that needs no further exposition. 🤩

So loved the ending. These Alistaire stories outdid the first six. Thank you for sharing.

Well-earned Favorite vote!

I loved this story! Yes it's not slightly believable, but it's delightful anyway.

You also capture the feeling of graduation at Choate really well. Maybe you had another school in mind, but... do other schools in Connecticut have a Tuck shop?

I can't wait to read the vacation with Poppy and Sloane! That last name always brings to mind Ferris Bueller's Day Off.

I'd like to see Alistair Rides Again, when he is back with his home harem, and the Poppy + Mum visit (separate encounters).

But, my foible, I would like to see him finally find love (or at least romance) possibly with a girl who he needs to court to get a kiss!

Both of the Alistaire series are super fun. I think my favourite part is how you write the character reactions and interactions. The Poppy chapters are my favourite for that. I find myself re-reading this series frequently and skimming through to find and re-read the dialogue.

I'd love to see a follow-up series with further adventures, but I even just wanted to see another 5 minutes to get the reactions to Nancy!

Sikorsky was a nice CT touch. And I laughed out loud at an earlier mention of the "Cranbury" mall.

We need Alistair's three ASAP

great

Enjoyed this very much. Hope you “revisit” Alistaire soon.

Thank you for these series, enjoyed them a lot! Very much looking forward to series 3 :)

Would love to see a 3rd round with Alistaire! Excellent writing all around