All Comments on 'All Aboard Andi's Dream Ch. 08'

Amazing story, hope you’ll dwell on the future of the new couple in the next iteration! Well done!

What a wonderful way to get some of the background to the brothers. You have built a wonderful series. Looking forward to seeing what comes next.

Will Paul ever find out that Mel was raped? In previous chapters he said that she died without honor. It would be nice if that entire situation was resolved beyond the court marshal.

The passage of time was a little confusing. John and Paul are estranged for ten years but Josh thinks that John and Macy are newlyweds. Also, it says that John served at the old church for two years. How can that be?

Other than those two notes this was a really great chapter. I’m glad you decided to share Paul’s story. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Do not worry, the story line about Melony is far from over. I try to make this story life-like and often in life when you think the situation is over, it will rise from it's hiding place, sneak up on you and bite you in the ass. It will be mostly resolved in chapter 9... mostly.

Very well done. Have enjoyed every word of every chapter. Waiting for the next.

You have done a wonderful story with these characters. These characters are so full of life.

I want more Lucy and Gus, Kenny and Yi-jin. You have weaved together We're a Wonderful Wife, Stormwatch and Andi's Dream into a non stop romance adventure.

I really can't wait for more.

I was so happy to get the back story in a concentrated way. A fine addition to the Andi compilation.

Oh boy, this has to be the most emotional instalment to date. I hope the rapist gets his dues and Melony is exonerated; I'd like to know the back story of the trial. Someone must have rated on Belcher??

It seems like the chapters get better and better!

5

Hot dam! Five big stars. I know that a story of this length represents a lot of work. Whatever led you to this site I'm forever grateful. You give us these stories for free. This was a three cups of coffee long and a wonderful way to start my day.

That was perfect. Thank you

I feel some level of turmoil. I actually left the series a couple chapters ago as it seemed to start to wander. I was bored with limited offerings today and said, “What the hell!” Best decision this month. This was absolutely the best prequel I’ve ever read on this site. My heart not regret is Paul never found it that his wife was raped. 5.0*

PS - Should read - my only regret.

The revisit of the storm rescue reminded me how much I didn't like it the first time all those chapters ago. Why on earth would a smart, tough survivor like Andi chose certain death over rescue? I'm a parent. I would NEVER choose certain death for my kids.

Apparently dear Anonymous you've never experienced real fear. Good for you, it's not fun. I'm not the little fear that keeps one hiding behind an anonymous ID, but real, gut wrenching fear that locks you up and twists your gut. You can sit there and say how brave you are but until your darkest nightmare stands in front of you, you have no idea what fear can do. NO idea.