All Comments on 'All About Katie Ch. 01'

You could have put another page on this one. Great so far.

Your so bad for leaving us hanging!!!!

The word Tease comes to mind as well as others!!

hehe

bob

Loved it, finish it up

Definately do a chapter 2

You need to take your sister-in-law across the state line and make her Wife #2 and then make her also a military dependent so that all your kids can have military benefits, as with that kind of fucking those two sister are definitely going to be getting swelling tummies.

Keep it going !!!

As Katie would say, "Don't stop"!

For leaving us wanting more like that

Oh Hell ya wife is goonna Fuck you and her sister crazy and im gonna cum while reading it

excellant story, please continue with this story its smoking hot

to cliffhangers. Tease is a good word for it. Great job.

Hey Pal don't quit story please please keep it going of ch. 03 thanks cfh

I love youe story, please more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

finish the story. did she lie or will her sister join them? will there be a sister on sister part? what happens?

Damned hot story.Please continue. You do need to do some editting as your brain is writing faster than you type and you're missing words or putting in wrong ones.

more more more you tell a great story

You are in the military, you can go over to the next state with Katie and marry her there so she can get free medical care while you start making babies with her..... More chapters are needed on this one.....

Great start, please continue the story

Very nice story, you should definitely do a part 2 :)

You need to keep going. Pretty hot. Got us going we both like the concept.

Interesting story, please continue!

Yes do please continue, know at least a small circle led readers wish to read more.

I realize this story is over a decade old, but if there’s any chance of a continuation, it would be appreciated

Where’s the rest? It was just getting good!