by Marasso
I really irked the story. I prefer the female character to have a little meat on their bones. More to love so to speak. Thanks for the write
Given Annabelleās great waist-to-hip ratio, I imagine she spends time in the gym doing squats. You could write that scene and describe her body in exhaustive detail ;-)
Beautiful love story without different gratuitous sex without commitment. Traditional but truly sexy and Igot hard reading it.
Great story, I liked it very much. So mature approach to relationship and love. Good job.
To paraphrase Terry-Thomas in Its a Mad, Mad, Mad, Mad world - you have an infantile preoccupation with Bosoms.
This is a beautiful love story, with great characters, plot, and a wonderful romantic atmosphere. While the love scene is much too short, the build-up to it is nicely paced and the character development. This story is very different from the other stories by the author, which only shows the range of his talent.
Five stars from me, I look for stories like that in this category, well written and well balanced.
Thank you everybody for such a wonderful feedback! Much appreciate that!
@Anon - thank you. I will write more stories with focus on romance, that I can say. If they will be like this one? I have no idea :)
This story hit close to home. I am pretty old-fashioned guy and often feel like I was born in the wrong generation. I hope I can find my own Annabelle someday. Great story.
very nice story. 5ā
Unfortunately I would not read the rest because it is not in my tastes.
Thanks for the warning.
@Hoover83 - thanks for the comment, I'm glad that you liked it.
@Anon - thank you! I hope that you will find your Annabelle one day, I wish you the best.
@franceman - thank you for the feedback! And I respect and I'm grateful for your stance - that what for the disclaimer was :)
Your writing is beautiful!! Loved the story!!Keep writing romance stories like these.......
@Anon - thank you for the feedback! Almost every of my stories have romance elements in them, as I just like this kind of interaction between characters :)
I love simple lover stories. I love simple characters who are in love. I love pinch of humour in stories. I lover nice characters who are nice to each other and to the world.
Wonderful story @Marasso. Really liked it.
@FaitfulToWife - thank you for the feedback, I'm happy that you enjoyed the story!
Haven't read your other stuff but you should definitely think of writing more of this type of thing. Nice long slow seduction topped by that wonderful ending
@geek_writer Hey, thank you for your comment! I usually try to put some romantic elements in my stories, but my second most similar story to All about traditions is La Vida Loca. You may check it if you want :)
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For not 'being in your wheelhaus'...this was excellente!
11/10!!!!!
@SatyrDick - wow, thank you for this comment! Yes, this story was out of my comfort zone, if I can call it that way. I'm glad you liked it.
5 stars read a couple of your other stores, not my cup of tea, but your writing is excellent. I agree with others, you should write more of these type of stories. Thanks for sharing.
@robdh51 - thank you for the comment. Yes, this story is much different than the rest of my works, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your kind words :)