All Comments on 'All Because of a Rusted Swing Set'

When I go through the romance section here.... I look for a story of a love blossoming , some happiness , romance with quality writing solid characters. I don't want just a wham bam thank you mame story . You checked all the boxes for my enjoyment.

5 stars

Every time I read this I feel a little soul cleansing.

Loved it, so warm and loving 5*

Heartwarming romantic story. And of all the authors on Literotica, you are one of the very few with hardly any grammar or spelling errors. Keep it up.

Of the hundreds of stories I've read on Lit, this is by far my favorite! I've read now four times and I'm certain I'll read it several more times. Job well done!

I just want to add my compliments to those others. This is the third time I’ve read this excellent romantic story. Thanks for sharing.

I want more of this.

Read this a while ago and thoroughly enjoyed it. Read it again and I think I enjoyed it more as its an excellent story. Bit of a surprise in some ways as I usually don't like swinger stories lol. BardnotBard

This is one of the best stories on this site. I've reread several times and it never gets old.

A gentle tale, with essentially no conflict. That's a minus, of course. There were lapses in past and present tense plus some other proofreading issues.

Still, four stars.

JPB NOT BOB

Marvelous, lighthearted story.

Nothing more need be said.

Thanks!

Such a pleasant story! A story with no pain for a change. 5 stars and a THANK YOU!

Wonderful sweet story. One observation though.....She was divorced a year ago, he was single over 6 months. Isn't it odd that two single 20/30 somethings would go months and months and months without even a kiss???? Perish the thought of....sex. Oh my....

Great story. Well written. Heartwarming. Please write a sequel.

A fine romantic story, with the classic 'I've been hurt, is it too soon?' trope. I like that you give the kids good play. My only quibble is that you could have played with the sex scene as skillfully as you did the rest, Even on this site it is good to see the physical stuff more masked and blended with dialogue. I don't think I do it as well as I could in my stories, but that's the challenge, to keep the 'personality' in the passion. I need to scope more of your other stories. Fine writing.