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Sman4444about 6 years agoGreat Story!
I like your stories a lot they are as sexy and hot for the guy as they are for the girl. I also like the sex and the romance together - good writing!
Anonymousover 5 years agoNice Fantasy
But too much like "True Romance" - not realistic at all. Plus you really need to work on the dialogue- it's stilted and not just unbelievable but down right corny! Get an editor to help you!!
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