All Comments on 'All Grown Up'

Great story! Thank You sooooo much!

Very hot story. She showed him how grown up she truly was. I don't think it was necessary to suggest she was going to get pregnant, that always seem to happen in these stories. But other than that this was very enjoyable.

A little hot.

Impregnation in these circumstances is not in the least erotic if you have enough imagination to consider what the two of them signed up for - she's too you, he's stupid

Let see what happens when her parents find out

Some readers didn't like the impregnation aspect. They are crazy. Loved the completeness of the story.

I think the thought of getting pregnant is really hot and I loved the way your writing flows.

A great read; carried me long! I’ll be checking out your other works!

I loved the added little fertilisation moment in the end there, it was a nice touch, and love how you leaned into that with both parties being unaware at the moment.

Definitely very erotic and the whole story was a joy to read.

Hope you continue to create more impregnation content like this with younger females :)

Epilogue:

"Morgan wait! I can explain! Uh........your dad is like...REALLY hot!"

Enjoyable read. Will be interested in the follow-up to see how the plot linr develops. Daughters reaction will be crucial on further events. Well done.

Can’t wait for the follow up chapters

Really well written! 10/10

Imagining all the different ways Tony's Convo with Kitty's Dad could go is a treat.

Thanks Anon

Really enjoyed it.

I like that it was short and to the point.

I'm writing my first story, it has a similar premise, though the girl is older at 19 and in university.

It is a longer story, my aim is to make it as realistic as possible, so it will be a very slow buildup to romance, and cover four years.

I enjoyed this story. It's nice to read a story with full consent from time to time, between reading stories like your usual ones. A literary palate cleanser

Excellent!

More like this please!

"...a tentative hope both fragile and beautiful as stained glass,"

A lovely line, perhaps the finest I have read on this site.

I like your stories Bro!! Keep up the good work!? How bout a father and stepdaughter themed fantasy?