All Comments on 'All I Want for Christmas'

A fun read

I've read your other stories and enjoyed them but I couldn't finish thus one. The writing and verbiage felt stilted and forced

I would love to see this story continued for the New Year's celebration up at the North Pole!!

A fucking great Christmas gift, or should it be, A great Christmas fucking? Either way, it's a hot and imaginative story. Can't wait to read the adventures of Trip and Grace on New Year's eve.

While I have been writing erotic stories (in secret, shh) for a long time, this was the first one that I offered up for public consumption.

Knowing others enjoy my work gives me the incentive to write more.

Happy Holidays to you all!

PS

New Years sequel? Great idea, I will get to work on that!

That was a winner for Sure! Use of the theme OUT STANDING! Use of humor OUT STANDING!! SEX - AMAZING! HOT! OUTSTANDING! 20 Stars! Did I mention I loved it? New Years sequel?

A short nice story with a great ending. Got a good laugh out of the coal.

I think I'll write a letter to Santa (evil grin)

nickinoo

I have to agree with anon I want a present like that this Christmas and where was Trip 10 years ago for my divorce... classic hehe well done

now that was a GREAT story to read about, i wish i could have something like that happen to me everyday and not just for christmas, that was just an awesome story!!!!!!!

This was great! I am totally trying this with Santa this year, goddamn that Trip was perfect!