All Comments on 'All It Took Was Vodka'

I particularly enjoyed the story being told by each of the players. (Although I doubt if the story, dialogue, etc. would be any different if it had been narrated by only one of the players or by some fifth person.) Too many authors, when switching narrators, tend to retell some (oftentimes, too much) of the story that the previous narrator just told. Not so in this story. That made it flow much better.

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This story, although not a sequel to our first, references events from our first story quite a bit. We changed the names for this story intentionally to keep it from being treated as a sequel. Since they are two different categories, we did not want to force readers into another category or make them feel as though they needed to read both stories to enjoy either. If you liked this story, and you want to know more details about Bess and Preston, you should check out our story "Ann's Sudden Lust" in the Loving Wives category.

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Well done. It is well written, well told and hot as hell.

Gave it 4 stars. Enjoyed the build up and the sex but you never explained how Bess went from reluctant and ashamed to lesbian action while sucking strange cock.

Definitely needs a chapter 2 though!