All Comments on 'All Mixed Up'

As disorienting as it is erotic. Well done.

Loved it. I think this story is ripe of a series of what she does and expects of him in the future. Does she get pregnant or marry him so she can have him earn the money while she trains him and others?

you are my favourite writer this is... insanely good. so good. u write mind control like no one else.

A stuttering, disjointed, confusing conversation of incredible eroticism that I couldn’t get enough of.