All Comments on 'All My Fault'

Great little vignette. Five stars and favorited.

Just re-read it again. Still the best story on Loving Wives, possibly on Literotica. 10 stars, as always. The Bear always approves this one.

The BEAR

Just an 'Effn awesome story.

Five stars.

This was a sad and uplifting story. A true loving wife.

That confession probably had him in despair until he realized she really loved him too much to let him go.

Sincerest condolences on the loss of your daughter

Oh. My. God. SUCH a perfect little flash story!

A true "Loving Wives" story for a change. Thank You for sharing it with us. Condolences on the loss of your daughter. My wife and I have been together for 42 years, and our children are healthy and happy, what more can you ask for. :-) Two years ago I wasn't sure if we'd make it this far, as I had a "widow maker heart attack". But we're still together looking forward to our next anniversary in July.

Firstly allow me to give you my deepest condolences on the loss of your daughter .Secondly thank you for a very enjoyable story .

Another wonderful story, not really a tear jerker, but well thought out and written. another author to favourite

Your story kind of blew me away. I understand you, my wife and I just had our 50th anniversary and I couldn’t imagine losing her. We also lost our eldest daughter several years ago to a stroke. Almost destroyed us! …… anyhow, I wish you well. Another Vietnam Vet

5 stars -

GEE I am faced with that final stage of life right now - not looking forward to the next 5 years, if I last that long.

A lovely, lovely story. AAAAAA++++++

Another great favorite story. Wow,

Bill S.

Really nice and well written story.....RIP Tracy.

Rest in peace Tracy.

As for you nit pickers. The math sometimes does not always work. But the love that the scene shows, is true.

Just read it again. Needed a little boost. I always get it from this story. To all the folks out there who nit-nick this story is the best I've ever read on Loving Wiives.10 sars, the Bear ALWAYS approves of this one. My favorite. God bless you, bud.

The BEAR

Just calculating: The have been married for 62 years and have a 12 year old granddaughter? It isn't said, at what age they married, but let's say they had their granddaughter at the age of about 70 (when marreid at 20). Let's say they got their latest child at 35 and this child parented this granddaugther at about 35 itslf. It seems they are all late with their children. It is said this 12 year old granddaughter is one of the older grandchildren. I had expected this to be one of the great grandchildren.

What a great story and a true romance that might not have been. Second or third time around for me. To bad the Ex's of the world don't ever stop and think of damage and hurt they cause when they decided to move on for their own selfish reasons and not even consider the hurt they are causing others, very, very selfish.

WOW, diferent story. Thinking about it, i feel that she had to tell him so bluntly about the plan or he might have felt she was holding something back. You brought tears to my eyes big time. Thank you for a nice story.

Very well written story.

And what a nap so very sorry for your loss.

Parents should always leave this life before their children.

God bless And keep you both.

I don't usually comment on stories, and usually prefer justice for the innocent. But this is a truely loving wife who despite facing and being pressured to the dark side, made the rational active choice to stay on the light. It has always been a choice in life, and she chose well. Her husband can also feel confident that she took and passed that test.

Heartfelt sympathies to the author for your own loss too.

LOL, great "Plan"

Very different story, really enjoyed it, sad end, but how many couples would settle for 62 happy years and 4 wonderful children, I think every married couple on the planet.

I’ll finish my comment I accidentally submitted unfinished below.

Even though I have misgivings about his quick acceptance of her change of heart, I do think the marriage is salvageable. I do think she is sincere, but still verification is needed and lots of caution for immediate future.

Great they live happy ever after.

Characters were good writing was good story line was very interesting. I enjoyed this story. Thank you. John.

My second maybe third time reading this story. Very engaging and quite the emotional roller coaster for me. The ending just tears me up.

Each time I’ve read I have wondered if she truly had him incapacitated with a grip on his penis. A grabbing his balls I can see holding him in place. A hand on her wrist and one gripping her throat as he rolls on top tips the balance in my mind. But that’s inconsequential

While I am way far from a BTB at all cost person and not a true RAAC, the years of deceit (what else do you call planning a divorce with no cause from day 1) and her callousness about his feelings until just a few days ago reflects her character to be shallow and way less than trust worthy. To roll over and be good with continuance of the marriage without some pause is just not real or rationale to me. Counseling needs to be on his mind now and a major requirement for going forward. Contingencies should go in place for him as a hedge against her “other” persona returning. To just wash over this because she acknowledges she was crazy to entertain and put in motion “the Plan” (she admits to treating him poorly the last month as she began “The Plan” ) is just dumb and not smart or sensible on his part. The end result may be his acceptance of her apology and pledge of love but not in a split second. Come in Man

That last line, it's all your fault, you know?, brought tears 😂

Just read it again. As always, it is fantastic. However, on reading the comments, I realized I never offered condolences to you on your loss. The misses and I have 5 children and the closest I have ever come to losing one was when they wheeled her down the surgical tunnel for open-heart surgery at the age of 3. I've shot at in combat, and I still was not that scared. Thank GOD and the Blessed Virgin she came through with flying colors. You have my sympathy. 10 stars as always. I keep your story in my favorites list, at the top, and reread it almost constantly. From one old guy to another, Bless You, My Son. The Bear always approves.

The BEAR

I'm sorry for your lose. It is a very sweet story

I am so sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing.

Firstly , let me say that I am so sorry for the loss of your baby girl cancer is such an insidious disease . Secondly I loved your story what a great plot twist . so in passing thank you for a very entertaining story .

My condolences for the loss of your daughter.

I know it get said all to many times in the comments on stories here, but this is damn near the best story on this site. Pretty sure I have read it 100 times.

My condolences on the passing of your daughter.

Well done, very well done. My condolences on the loss of your daughter. 5*

Great story with a very clever twist.

Well that was definitely worth the time it took to read it. If I had a memory I would remember who wrote it so I could read it again and again.

Thank you for writing this.

SHOULD BE A 6 PLUS NOT A 5.

story as writen is fine, but the destructiveness of parents is incalculable. the love evidenced in the story is v good. my 1* is for the mother.

I am sorry about your daughter. Parents should never outlive their children.

Lovely story.

Also, sorry for your loss.

Loved it!

Also, I just have no words to explain bow I sorrow for the loss of your daughter.

Lovely story, sad ending

5/5

Lovely story. Hate cancer winning. 5*s.

Just as good on the second reading.

Good story.........5 star 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Short and sweet, a fun story to read... 5 Stars...

Damn.

They are some despicable people in this world. Luckily a couple of great ones, too.

Again, this story always cheers me up, even as it breaks me down. Recently, however, Another contender has entered the fray. "The Death of a Cuckold". I can't decide between the two, So I have declared a tie. 10 stars to each of you, and thank you for the chance to share these two beautiful stories. The Bear heartily approves. Keep on writing; I'll keep reading.

The BEAR

Cute and sweet.

Good story and unfortunately theres many women who marry solely for monetary gain fooling innocent men in the process.

Beautiful and romantic story. The ending was very beautiful but sad. Definitely a five star rating 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

A sad and beautiful story. While she is telling him the plan, you hope he dumps her immediately. Then as she finishes and gives him total control, you see the real love between them. 62 years together was a great touch. Both my wife and I went or are going through fucking cancer. I hate that disease with a passion. And I'm very sorry for all of our losses of loved ones, especially the children.

My wife of 37 years passed from Ovarian Cancer. It was swift, decimating her in only 6 months time. In the hospital bed with machines beeping moments before her end, she whispered in my ear "when we got home she was going to rock my world. We were gonna have great sex!".

It softened my heart, thanks.

Great story, and I’m very sad for your loss. 5 stars.

Fuck..no parent wants to outlive there child. Condolences author

four words. Loved it. Very Sad

Sorry for your loss. A friend used say that if they come with useful equipment,there would be bounties out for that.

Sorry for the loss of your daughter. I have a friend of 66 years that lived your story. After three children she hit him with divorce. He Mayer found a letter written by her mother on their wedding day teaching her how to set him up. Take money and hide it in a bank in a different state. How she economically destroyed him took the 3 kids and left the state. She told them such horrible things that he has only seen one daughter once in the last 12 years. He was always told her father was dead. Boy was he surprised when he showed up at the door one day. Now he worries his 3 girls will be just like mom and grandma.

When I began this story I didn't have a clue where you were going with it but as with seemingly all the others, I enjoyed it very much. By now your daughter has been gone 10 years but I know the pain is still there. Cancer is cruel, I've been luckier than most. I'm sorry for your family's loss. 5 stars for you story though.

somewhere east of Omaha

O.K., we got no electricity, no heat, no water, and this pandemic keeps us is solitary. I needed something to cheer me up. My wife is rolling he eyes again, so she knows what I'm reading. 10 stars ( you know the drill ) and the Bear thanks you. Always my favorite story. Thank you.

The BEAR

Different and good!

I was in the hospital with a stroke, and I had to get some good vibes. I feel better now. Thanks, Vulcez. 10 stars again. My favorite story. The Bear approves. Keep loving each other.

The BEAR

Stories so good that I had to read them all again.

Great little story. Somewhat unbelievable, but unbelievable in a way that makes truth come out. 5*

Truth is what keeps lovers together

I was very lucky in life, i had the best wife any man could ever want. 45 yrs together with 44 yrs of those married.

We never had any of the marriage problems you read about in Lit., but my love did die in my arms from the big "C". This story brought that back and as memories go brought a bit of wetness to my eyes. Wonderful story, thanks. KUDOS

Nothing is more poignant and heart rending than a beautiful woman, young or old as she falls victim to an illness, such as cancer. Nothing is so excruciatingly painful as a husband standing by watching the love of his life succumb to the illness. It is a fact of life, and we should be used to things like this, but we never are. The only thing that keeps us sane is the wonderful memories of a life between two people well lived. Thank you for sharing your talent with us readers.

👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 ......

I just re-read it again, and I still sniffle . My all time favorite story. sorry, stangstar06, saddletramp1957, qhm1, Slirpuff, et all. I 've to stop doing this. My wife will take one look at me, and know what I've been reading. The Bear definitely Loves it.

The BEAR ( Again)

I really enjoyed the story. "5"

I hope Katey told her Dad what happened. Cheryl needed to explain to her first husband in fact all the girls did.

A 5 star story. Great concept. Very enjoyable read.

I just re-read it for I don't know what time. It's great. My wife has read it also. She thinks I'm a little wussy about it, but she was smiling when she said it. Married 49 years, 5 kids , 8 grandchildren, and 2 more on the way. She is a stroke survivor, and love her with all my heart. 20 stars ( Some off you may know, I can't count, and they limit us to 5 stars. ) The Bear approves; now stop making me tear up.

The BEAR

Extremely unusual, and well crafted. I kept waiting for him to dump her, and move as far away was he could get.

Thanks for the great story.

I had to wonder, though: what does one feel when he/she finds out that their spouse had a 5 year plan when they got married, that the marriage was just about money to him/her, and the 5 year plan ended with divorce? Would I feel betrayed? Yeah, I most certainly would. I think that my love for my wife would have taken a serious, perhaps fatal(?), hit if that had been sprung on me.

Another great story from Vulcez , another of those authors you wish was still writing. Some of the best on LW.

A really well written story and what a concept ! this is the second story by this author that I have read and find he writes a refreshing plot. A great pity he is not more prolific. Couldn't give him more than 5*s but wish I could!

Thanks for sharing

Sorry about your daughter

All the best to you and your loved ones

....of a story, to think that such cold, calculating women exist. I wonder how many of such people ever find anything approaching happiness.

Beautiful and well-crafted. Powerful considering the length.

Really good story. I wasn't sure that it would go this way, but all turned out great.

Really good story worth every bit of the 5 stars would give it more if I could. well written and well thought out

In fact, it may be AstroTurf.

I'm so glad she wised up and didn't follow Mom's stupid selfish plan. My daughter also had cancer but was caught early and curable. She is a Pediatric Surgeon today. I'm only anonymous because this is NOT A FREE SPEECH site unless it agrees with their opinion/beliefs. Hypocrites.

I also have a daughter and I can honestly say that I would go certifiably nuts if I lost my daughter. That being said, I love your writing style. It's not a boilerplate piece that some other authors allow to roll off their desks.

Well written and thought provoking. I've read a lot of these stories and can recall no other story with even close to this storyline. Originality is hard to accomplish among so many attempts in a single category. Good show.

About a year earlier. Thank You. Signed: BTW

Great story parent (s) can warp a child some hopefully a lot get straight later

Lose reality of love thinking about it as illusion fantasy etc

Maybe if lucky find it

Or even better, pay attention to her parents. How do they treat one another? That's what their kids may have learned.

"We, at least I, actually believed this was the way things were done by every family until I got older and had friends whose Dad was the father of all the kids and was still part of the family." - How old was she when she learned about normal families? Ten? So her mother was teaching her all this crap before she was ten?

"I may have to come up with a way of letting him know without alienating Mom." - Why the fuck does she care about that bitch, who almost ruined her marriage?

I agree with the comment on the timing. When her mother started her "plan" divorce laws weren't even close to what they are today. There weren't "no fault" divorces, and if she tried to divorce her husband without cause she would have gotten very little.

Your heart and mind will follow. But i can tell you this much, when she lets go, the heart and mind will be free. After that, if your not a bit pissed off, then you don't have much in the way of balls. If that's the only way she can get and keep your attention, then she's not worth it.

Sorry to hear about your daughter. Can't imagine how much that hurts.

I wish there were more stories like this if anything it's more of a romance story than loving wives

Its a sign of the times. Most women are looking for a bank account when they fall in love. Its distasteful but alas its true. There have been studies about college age ladies shown pictures of the same guy, in one instance, they are told that he was just a normal college kid. The other instance they are told he is a dot com millionaire, guess who they chose as someone they would date. With laws today that favor the women, they can make themselves very rich with a divorce con.

I wish we had more like this, but then truly lovely stories are rare by their very nature.

Great effort and well told. 5*****

A great little story. A little sad at the ending, but really a great one overall. So sorry about your daughter. I lost my mother to cancer at 81 it's a terrible thing.

We are pre-programmed for it so we quickly learnt the ways of our tribe.

These days it is the ways of our family unit but more insidiously exposure to psychologically crafted targeted commercial advertising. Instilling warped personal beliefs in children during their formative years is tantamount to child abuse which should be a criminal offence as it becomes part of a child's belief system well into adulthood and therefore considered quite normal behaviour by them, requiring a major event for them to even start considering that it might not be true.

For example: supposing I told you all of the religious teachings were a load of bunkum that couldn't be true giving you a whole raft of valid rational reasons supporting this statement. If you have religious beliefs you would dismiss me out of hand and if you listened to my arguments you would have made up your mind that they couldn't be true even before hearing them, tagging me as a nut-case. On the other hand if you already have some nagging doubts you will listen to the arguments but still evaluate them with a bias that they can't be true. Such is the strength of our belief system. That is why it is called blind faith. You believe without any logical reason or proof because that is what you were taught.

Kate no doubt also had the idea of getting married instilled like most young girls with the help of the Hollywood brain washing machine, although I suspect many of them do not think beyond them being the centre of a fairy tale wedding. So it would be natural for Kate to want to conform like most of us. It is unlikely that she even thought of "The Plan" applying to her marriage at this time. It was only as the five year point was approached that the wicked mother pushed "The Plan" that she realised she was expected to make the sacrifice but also realised she didn't have to do it.

The intransigent morons who wanted to kick Kate to the curb are shown to be totally wrong as the marriage survived over sixty-two years until her death. Whereas morons following their own narrow minded strategy would have been left more bitter than they already were.

They go on about disrespect - only in their own minds - demonstrating what a low self-esteem they have living by themselves or in a loveless marriage.

If you only think negative you will only get negative results.

A parent should never out live a child

She had a plan she was following until she saw a better plan? I don't think so. All those years of disrespect and now she expects him to forget about it, ignore her plan and live happily ever after? With a lying, manipulative bitch? He should be down at the bank, cleaning out the accounts and then onto his lawyers to leave her with as little as possible. Use her Mother as a BAD character reference and bury the bitch! Just an awful ending.

For 5 years she played her husband and then in the last few weeks she comes to realize that she loves him enough to stay with him! Well....isn't she special! Myself..I would be in a quandary. What was she giving me in the previous 5 years? Obviously not all that much as the writer states in first part of this story. Everything she did in bed that night was a first for him, so she hasn't been much of a wife so far! I just don't know how I would react to her admission and the 5 year plan. But there is no doubt that she has been a royal bitch for 5 years and asks that all be forgiven now that she has decided to stay with him!