All Comments on 'All Right I'll Do It'

by LaurenWestley

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow!

Somebody gonna get 'er up the POOP CHUTE purty soon, I betcha!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
very hot

please continue oh pretty please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

hot story............would have like to see more of toilet stuff like ur other stories.................

candy_writercandy_writerover 13 years ago
good start

U have a good start here sweetie. like it

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

your stories are hot.............they gave me hard orgasms...........and ya your toilet stuff is awsome

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
can't wait to read the next chapter

This story is so hot. It's exactly what I've been fantasizing about -- getting caught by 2 hot hung guys wearing my sister's sexy clothes. I can't wait to read what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Tina

Very cool I have had a similar experience except I was on a chatline and I would get drunk and leave random guys I thought what they wanted to do was hot my drunken ass would leave very sexy slutty messages telling them things I craved late night drunk and stoned besides I would never see any of the horny guys anyway.well one day I get a message by a voice I knew but couldn't place , he said I know you and you know me and he would tell me what to do later, it was my big boss general sales manager, he said he had work at his home for me did I want some extra cash , I was broke so I did I worked in his yard sweaty and dirty I finished he said you can get a shower and the we can settle up . I got out of the shower and my clothes were gone and there was a slutty bra pantes fishnets, miniskirt,and top , w instructions , makeup a wig nails ,all of it and it said if I do this he pay me a extra 100, I did it I was doing shots as I got ready and was feeling like a lil slut when I came out it was my boss , and two other guys from work , I was treated like a stripper , made to give lap dances , they would smack my ass, and my boss paid me more money to suck jimmy and Allen off at the same time while he watched ,then he took my to his room had me bend over and he spanked my ass hard till I bout cried then he fucked my sissy ass w his big thick dick and he said I own you for a while now your my newest girl , I'll take care of you but you do anything I say or I'll punish ur ass

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 6 years ago
Good and bad.

Erotic? Yes.

Crossdressing? Yes.

Blackmail? Yes.

Did the CD enjoy anything? No.

If you would have let us hear your main character getting even a little bit excited, desiring what was being done, then that would let this (hot) story fit into the TS/CD category. Since you didn't, it belongs in the NonConsent/Reluctance category.

Having said that, the writing was pretty good. It was a quickie, so smooth dialogue and character development will have to happen later. Anyway, it was a decent N-C/R story with a CD facet. Nice work. I hope you keep writing.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 4 years ago
exciting

Hot story, I wouldn't mind being Tina and entertaining a couple of guys but they should bring their girlfriends for me to eat out also. Who knows what might happen with us and all the beer :) TG Tiffany

midtwnnycmidtwnnycover 1 year ago

mmm......i'd do that for them...i think getting caught is hot...or loosing a bet on purpose....

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