All Comments on 'All Saint's Eve'

Better than going to a party!

5

great dialogue — a natural talent you got there

What an excellent Halloween! Well written, good dialogue and action descriptions... I'll even give you full marks for the implied scenes. Looking forward to more, and thanks for posting. Hmu if you want a proofreader/editor for the next one.

Excellent!

This was a great story and it captured college life as how I could be and I long to hear the stories that would come after the wild nights of fucking and whether the girls could continue to share Jordan or whether they would become possessive of his attentions after getting their first tastes. Great story! Five stars for sure.

Really hot!

5 stars.

Great story - both humorous and erotic. Very well written