All Comments on 'All That Glitters Ch. 28'

Great chapter. A few words out of place but not story breaking. Can't wait for the next one

The last two chapters have been exceptional. Keep up the great work.

What a simply marvelous chapter added to a wonderful series. I always look forward to a new entry and even more so now.

Thank you for sharing your talent. I'm enjoying this tale so much. Well done.

Once again you gifted us with a great escape from our every day. Please keep it up.

Thank you again for sharing this story!!! It continues to be fascinating...thought provoking...suspenseful...and just plain entertaining to the highest order!!!!! The way you write it makes us feel like we really know the characters and I look forward to many more addictive chapters!!!!

It's another great day when a new chapter of `all that glitters` shows up! Wonderful story, just sucks us right in. Thanks for it.

Great Si Fi'' great Space western. and now so much more. I love the bit with the pets. This should put a bit of humor into the life on Liramor-23. There are so many ways mischievous pets can liven up the story. And wait till they meet the "aliens" 5 stars only because there are not more to give.

🤔 shades of honer harentons tree cats

Liked your story from the beginning and now with the improvement in your writing style the flow of the story moves much better

I found this paragraph interesting from a scientific POV.

"The shuttle made good time getting to the station and entered the dock indicated to them. Ten of the people were waiting on the dock. The shuttle pilots were surprised that the dock did not need to depressurize nor pressurize while vessels came and went. They used the shuttles sensors to surreptitiously take as many measurements as possible."

But on one of the many rereads (up to six now), I was think while very convent, this is a HUGE security risk. If an enemy could just pass thru a field and unload it soldiers, you have given the enemy an easy foothold or beachhead for boarding your vessel unless there was some way to secure it by closing the hatch or something.

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I am curious on what they expect to accomplish about delaying until they get to the Home Star. They have to know after this chapter, that a war on any front is useless against Union. At some point the question is going to have to be asked to the Delegation, if the Emperor asked you to attack us knowing our response would be to wipe out your fleets and your civilization, what would you do? Then playing the encrypted video of his orders to do just that. The Union knowing all along what their plans were because they had broke their encryption and have kept giving them outs to change the direction of the negotiations back to peace.

PS, I am also hoping for a future scene where Raymond or Kim have contest against multiple Warriors in a free for all showing that it's not even a difficult fight for them in a many against one scenario.

By far the best story currently running on this site. Professional quality. Keep up the good work.

Really enjoying this. Was recommended by some readers of three square meals and I read all of these in a week. Now I want more!! :)

My hats off to the author/creator of such a mesmerizing tale!!!

Always liked this story, but you've just taken it to an even greater level.

Thank you

While I like the story, so far as currently shown the whole empath/brainwash experience has been a huge waste of time. I hope that a real purpose for spending so much time on them is shown

To anonymous: one must first learn to crawl, and then walk before they can learn to run. Clark Kent spent his entire childhood and teenage years learning about his powers before he became superman. Junelliya has only just come into her powers. She must learn to grow into them before she can effectivly use them, as you will see in the coming chapters.

Exquisite!

Love the cats, hope they get to take them home!

A missed opportunity to describe the Pod-Drran little ones aside from height. Still not clear in my mind how they look like. Still look like giant locusts in my mind but description of actions 'tongue' don't fit my mind and colours of skin etc, head, neck, eyes, nose, any antennae, number of arms (still keep thinking there are 4 arms), do they have skin/chitin etc. Lots of details that can be sprinkled in the writing to build up a picture.

No colouring or pattern description the cats. Hard to picture the scene.

I’m really hoping that Sean gets more screen time to speak. He’s literally the first character mentioned in the book series, but has appeared and maybe a dozen paragraphs?