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Click here"Our detractors will jump at the chance to be the prosecution in this trial. They will work behind the scenes to ensure that our Goddaughters are found guilty of at least one serious offence.
"They will force the ultimate punishment on them and us!" Jarl informed his mate.
"They cannot execute a brood! Poda-La spoke through the Atohan and prohibited the killing of the innocent!" the Kumaraie shouted.
"No, they will not ask for execution," Jarl explained. "They will demand that they be removed from our house as unworthy! We will have to disown them and the Atohan with them! That will turn the Union against us. That will bring anger from the Greater Community itself.
"This trial could very well break apart the Greater Community!"
"Worse, if the children are not their to support Prakeshya, she will neve become the ruler of the Oranae!"
The Kumaraie finally understood her mate's anger and the extent of her error...
End of chapter sixty-two.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoI started reading this because it has so many chapters. I didn't expect the emotional rollercoaster that I have been on. I have laughed and cried but most of all I have been thoroughly entertained.
Anonymous5 months agoVery well written creative complex story. The created universe of the story is amazing and I am amazed biggtddybr has maintained the consistency of such a large complex universe.
That said the story has lost my interest due to that complexity. I find reading the last several characters a tough slog through the necessary minutiae required to support the complex universe. It is too real with pages of detail about too many species and characters then a paragraph of action that is explained and investigated and autopsied to the electron microscope level.
The next major plot of putting the children on trial is a jump the shark moment. All of the major characters should say NO NEXT. I quit reading this. Thanks for your efforts.
EasyReader445 months agoGreat chapter as always, is the Series discontinued on lit, or ? Usually not this Long betjene updates ?
bigtddybr6 months agoAuthorTo Dontyouwishyouknew:
Yep, even the best of us makes mistakes and I and my editors failed to catch that. Shusshhttookkann should have spoken in her characteristic lisp. I have corrected that on the original, however, Lit does not provide an easy fix for inserting corrections into stories. Thanks for the catch. Chapter 63 is being created with plenty of juicy tidbits in it for the story line. Stay tuned, same Glitters channel, same Glitters time...(yeah I know...)
