All Comments on 'All The Way In'

Ms Dubinsky is pretty amazing. Having gone to a Jesuit high school, I think I missed something!

You just might be the best writer on this site!

I really enjoyed the build to this one, and there's definitely room for another chapter. Hope you write a Part 2!

You have to continue on this one. I like it very much.

Kind regards

vonLassen

Excellwnt story!

Hi. Loved your story, and would also love to hear more about how their relationship evolves and how both grow because if it!

Start to finish you set the imagery perfectly. Would look forward to reading a part 2 or even a series about these characters

Enjoyed this immensely. Thanks

Leah’s boyfriend changes name halfway through. Ryan -> Brett. Just a small jarring point.

One of the best stories I've ever read on here. Your dialogue -- internal and external -- was totally realistic, and you managed to keep this story going far longer than I ever thought possible. I'm looking for more of yours now. Obviously, a 5.

Hope there are more chapters to this story. Really enjoyed it🙏🏻

Very yummy indeed! I hope there’s more to this story! Thank you!

This deserves a series of at least a sequel. Part 2 Please!!!

I'm impressed with this! You kept this thing going and the tension building for a long time. Strong work! I hope there can be more about this odd couple. Puts me in mind of a particular HS teacher from the long ago...I wonder if she's on Facebook?

Nicely put together ! Definitely continue !

Loved this one. Ms. D. is every teenage boys' high school flame. The fact that's she's also a strong, confident sexual dynamo only adds fuel to the fire. I'd love to see this one go for more chapters.

Ryan changed names to Brett about page 4. Other than that, this was a great story.

Thanks for sharing!

Yeah, I know. Sorry about that. I’m working on another story right now with a Ryan, and I got my signals crossed.

Apologies, everyone. You get what you pay for!

Good job on drawing out the story and then having a brief finish, without drawing it out. You obviously understand the importance of a slow approach, kind of like dating. There is a powerful force unleashed when two people slowly approach each other, holding back until it becomes unbearable. It makes the experience and story so much more enjoyable.

Great character development. Excellent buildup.

I love your style, and this is one of the best yet. Are we going to follow these two any further? I'd like to see them navigating the rest of the school year.

Have him knock her up, please!

Don't leave us hanging here...

Funny and hot.

All really well written. Sex? Indeed. But there never seems to be enough buildup/foreplay/teasing/discussion about what turns him on/what he's like to do/whether he'd like to do "X" or "Y"/etc.

And there's not nearly enough involvement with breasts.

But I'll read some more.

I had it bad for a teacher in highschool too. Every once in a while I wonder how she's doing. And now that I'm an adult and she's only ten or so years older than me, I think about what could be... if only.

My gosh. I think this is now my absolute favorite here on Lit!

Extremely well written;

Wonderfully handled virgin boy and young teacher topic;

The sex portion was the best I've read here - no long drawn out stream of capital letters;

Very true to life - I hope you've done more of their story...

Wow, you really are some writer! Beautiful descriptions and flowing unravelling consciousness, well done

And thank you

Now that's a story. Well done.

Dude, it's so cold! You'll feel like your goolies are shriveling up and floating away."

one part of my brain functioning rationally while all the rest was spazzing the fuck out.

I was genuinely laughing reading this story, really cool too though. A great read

Al’

That’s an amazing story. Thanks. You’re a very talented story teller.

Great story building nicely to the end with a promise of more from Ms Dubinsky for Todd. Hopefully a sequel.

5⛤

5 STARS!!! Great story, very well written. Loved it. So good

I would love to read more of Todd and Ms. D

I didn't even finish Page 1, due to ALL the mistakes, which I forgot due to the sheer number of them!

This was awesome. Sad it ended too soon. Sounds like the start of something promising between those two. Ms D is certainly a firecracker under that cutesy exterior.

A sequel would really put you first place as my all time favorite writer

There's a sequel of sorts... Ms D reappears with a couple of young gentlemen in "Naked Wednesday."

A clever tease of a story. Lacks warmth and my enjoyment was limited by my not being American, or young, or a shouty, sweary teenager. Still they say it's horses for courses, and you certainly won this at a smart canter.

Totally Awesome!!! Well done!