All Comments on 'Allender's Hunt-Big Game'

Randi, going to have to think about this story a while. I can relate, except that mine never told me. I found out on my own. I wish it was a story. All better now. It took the love of another to make it so. A very well written story!

; -) Sometimes sheep killin' dogs are alpha males that think they are entitled to take what they want. Even if not alpha males, sheep killin' dogs wind up bein' shot.

I think what Raines had done to him was over the top, Allender was as much to blame for what happened as he was.

They were both barely dressed to generate body to body heat, which is what they needed from what I have read.

Always going to be hard on both to not get aroused, she was an attractive woman.

She woke up humping his leg, he reacted.

From there she did nothing to stop him, she didn't do anything to stop the arousal going further , and she was fully aware what was happening, yet she did absolutely nothing to discourage him.

I think most blokes would be hard pressed to not get aroused with a nearly naked woman humping your leg.

As to him ringing her after he found they had separated is hardly cause to kill him.

She could have simply said "I told you not to contact me this is your last warning"

I always enjoy this one. I stop by every now and then to reread it. As a longbow shooter and hunter I am very much aware of the errors in description. And as a beginning writer I know the importance in story flow. Always a five