All Comments on 'Ally and her Sister Pt. 02'

THOSE LADIES ARE FIESTEY(sp) AND ROWDEY............. A GOOD MIX!!!!!!!

THANK YOU FOR SHARING!!!!!!!!!

GUNRUNNER

Two chapters of very good build-up and suddenly three paragraphs of closure? I was expecting to wait for each of several more chapters. 5 ***** for what their was. Still, it was very disappointing.

I enjoyed the love story. I would like to have learned more ot the rest of their life together. I think Ally would eventually marry Ellie. I think Jeff would eventually adopt Sheila since he is clearly becoming her Daddy.

I was ready for a long story. Thought the ending was rushed. You really could have made this a lot longer after all the character development. Maybe there will be side stories to fill in the between years? We can only hope.

A really compelling story, a lifestyle made for me I feel. The way your words played out made one feel a real part of this group of people. Thank you. Iceman

SierraSprite managed to put into one sentence what I love about his stories: "That's right, what we care about is the loving, isn't it?"

THANK YOU

Really enjoyable story.

Brilliant!!!!!