All Comments on 'Ally's "Unwilling"'

by PhoenixGreen

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CarlottaCarlottaover 14 years ago
Great Story!

I hope this is not a one shot deal, because I want to hear more. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks, and good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Can't Wait..

Loved the story. I can't wait till Luke joins the fun!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great!

Super hot story. I do hope there's more to come. I'd love to read what happens when his friend joins in on the fun!

SpankMe2K3SpankMe2K3over 14 years ago
Awesome read

I loved this story. I sure hope you continue it and definitely bring Luke back in for some more pain, punishment and humiliation.

WindyLadyWindyLadyover 9 years ago

omg Why can't I find a guy like him. I think this has become one of my all time favorite stories here. I know you have not posted more since 2009, but it was so good I had to say something. Who knows maybe it might convince you to write some more stories. You end them so well where the reader can then add their own chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Wow. Amazing

This should be a series!

xavierwxavierwover 2 years ago

Such an implausible story but one so well-written it was still stellar! Looking forward to the next chapter!

X-Man

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