All Comments on 'Almost Caught!'

That was great! I could feel the heat and sweat, and Jan’s tight little body! Been there, but not right there. Desire delayed, the right circumstances, and damn! Thanks!

Rory was an asshole. MC's parents were even bigger ones. A crappy story

Maybe my third time, and still love it, your description of her body-LOVE petites...!

...both crazy horny...will be even better in a proper bed, after a shower, him able to recharge in minutes...

easy five/fave...

Great story, invested from near the start. I'm a bit confused by the reviews criticizing the non-character girlfriend of 8 weeks. A barely experienced 19 year old with his best friend of 15 years. These two things aren't comparable. I felt those facts made the story more believable. The sexy naked neighbor is an author setting up for sequels and drama. Easy to make that leap with teenagers to boot. Full or hormones and inexperienced.

I hope it works out for them!

Great story.

Hooked

5 Stars as I also have skinny dipped with my best friend's sister . She was not a Virgin but sadly she was a pain in the ass .

Commenters are saying there’s no romance. I disagree. Being friends since childhood creates a sense of intimacy. Allowing each other to express physically what they’ve likely considered many times… holding the trust that their friendship will survive it, and the added dimension to their relationship will only strengthen it. If that isn’t a love story, I don’t know what is. - This was much hotter than the first time I read it.

Real good

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

A tale told well. And worthy of a hot sequel.

A little shallow in the telling but a 5 star tale nevertheless. A fun tale & a bit of a break from the terribly intenseness of the longer tales.

Bill S.

Excellent story, well told. I like the fact that our hero has misgivings and gets hard at small tits and big tits. I also like fact that they got caught, which is more what would happen in real life.

Kinda fun.

LeB

A romance? Seriously, I couldn't think of a better category for this than erotic couplings.

A romance would have described the special relationship Jan and Derek have, just like the author did. But the guy either hadn't had a girlfriend or he'd at least part ways with her after he came together with Jan.

A big NO is the outlook of impending swapping.

Being just a detail in the scheme of things, Derek compared the fake tits of the daughter of the house with Jan's natural titties, concluding he liked the latter much better, as do I. After being caught he suddenly changes the assessment, calling the mature couple the epitome of beauty and sexiness, this time including the fake tits. I'd call this an inconsistency, one that results for me in sharing the guy's taste at first only to hit a wall when he changes his mind 180°.

On a side note, the way Jan's mammaries are described, small but with big (puffy) areola and nipples, they are likely still in the process of growing...

THIS IS NOT ROMANCE

Hot. Well done.

The guy already has a girlfriend and he works for half the salary of his colleagues.

Not exactly a stand up genius.

good one, thanks

very likable characters...young and horny..

like all boobs, esp petites, but sounds he might get to try some prime ex-lg soon...f

definitely think he should volunteer to to relieve her of her remaining cherry...

Damn, no tears from this story but it sure is cute! Kinda reminds me of my first time, sure showed me how wonderful the female could be .......

Didn't like the hint of them swapping. Would have liked there to be some more romance in the aftermath.

It would be a big shame if they didn't end up together permanently.

Good story...

I love a Romance, but see none here. The story hints strongly at swapping with Denise and her man. There is no love when there is swapping, is just lust and a fuck fest...

They were caught and put in the bait box for future use. Truly, I was suprised that the walls of the playhouse stood up under the pressure. It sounded as if there would be more in their friendship down the road.

Another creative and enjoyable story. The line between friends and lovers can be very slim. 5 stars, to help counter the moronic anon who can't abide even a hint of cheating.

A great story. Although the details were nowhere near the same, it reminded me of my friend coming over once when I came home sick from work. And we wound up having sex for the first time. Great story. Worthy of 5 stars.

The main character has a girlfriend. This means hes a cheating scumbag. Since this story was not flagged for cheating it automatically gets a 1/5.

Man, u nailed it again. Awesome.

Fun with sizzling sex scenes. The author is a master.

A super story. A unique point of view. Well done.

Liked the story. Maybe for another nude day you can write it from the point of view of the couple in the pool.

Looking forward to reading the continued story.

Bloody good.

Great story! Very hot! I would love to read a sequel

I really enjoyed this sweet little tale. Kudos!

Aureole is a halo of light surrounding a religious person in a painting. Breasts have an areola.

nostalgic, and fun, and verrrry hot (and well written, too, of course)!

I am so old it is hard for me to remember, LOL.

I have a best friend like that too that I don't want to ruin the relationship with feelings. We've talked about it and we chose to stay friends just incase though.

so much wrong with this lame tale

It put a big smile on my face.

oldies become goodies, TK U MLJ LV NV

...and I was erect through most if this tale.

Wonderful story. Noe have a pool party with neighbors

I am new to this kind of writing, and really enjoyed this story. I thought your pacing and how you expressed it in dialog was very nice. I want to learn to do this.

Surely one of the most downright sexy stories on the site! Just simply a SIZZLER!! MORE of those would work!!!

old friends become better and deeper. TK U MLJ LV NV

story. You change the pace so well. Keep on writing. You're one of the people I am trying to learn from, even when there isn't much explicit sex, which clearly was 'not' the case here.

well written, humorous in the right places and very sexy. I really enjoyed reading it.

This is the first story I have read of your's. I'm impressed. I think I'll read a few more.

Richard

That was one of the best stories ive read on literotiaca!!!

You write so well --- i enjoy all your work

Enjoyed the tale Tex, and the little twist at the end was a nice addition. Agree with the comments about having a hard time truly trying to visualize the positions inside such tight cramped quarters, but whatever the hell position they were in, the sex itself was hot and exciting.

Once again...a good read. Thank you

I gotta be honest...I very nearly bailed on this story halfway thru page one because it was taking so long to develop, but im very glad I didn't!

I love 'girl next door' types especially when they have flat chests, big nipples and firm round asses, and your heroine did not disappoint.

I felt like I needed to consult an anatomy text or the kama sutra to visualize some of the positions they were in inside the playhouse, but the fucking action was hot and the emotion of best friends turned lovers was sincere.

very well written.

I give it one big cock, straight up!

A truly fantastic story. It had me hard from the beginning and never let up. ANY chance of continuing the plot line? I'd like to "see" the results!

Some much detail none of which distracted. What a build to an incredible ending and a huge desire for more. Great story. Real like the "other couple" as well you turned them into something more than in the normal stories. Thanks!

you need to continue this storyline!!!

Very enjoyable fantasy, which turned out refreshingly different from what I was expecting. Strong in its dialogue and convincing in its detail. Nice - piece of writing, Tx.

Great story, well written, good plot development, well done.

One of the best Nude Day stories I've read. Good luck in the contest.

This story demands a sequel! Sexy pool party, sharing the girls. More!

Great imagination and timing

I'm hoping for a second part to this story, just like many others I suspect.

Best of luck to you, a well-deserved 5.

...simply awesome. Best of luck to you!

Please make a part 2. Please. Please. Great job!

I liked it, I really did. Best of luck to you in the contest.

DG

hot, steamy, dirty, nasty, sex! Gotta love it. More please

And we are getting a sequel right?

That was certainly a different scenario with some literally and figuratively hot sex.