All Comments on 'Almost Twins'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I guess I'm not the forgiving type because there's no way I would allow either one of these evil bitches to touch me. They'll probably take their dirty sheets to Mom and accuse brother of jacking off on them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fun story, looks like it could be a multiple chapter adventure

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowalmost 2 years ago

That was fucking hot! More, more, more, please!

ShortyMacShortyMacalmost 2 years ago

Hot Hot HOT! Wish I has sisters like that. My sister is 11 years older than me and got married when I was 6. So I was pretty much an only child growing up. Hope you add more chapters to this story.

Areth456Areth456almost 2 years ago

Will it have part 2?

sweetzebrasweetzebraalmost 2 years ago

Thank you for a very horny moment - and congratulations for conjuring up such hot setting and action using a seemingly dry, simple language. And over only two pages - I usually don't even go there unless it's five or six.

I definitely hope you're writing more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It was well-written, mostly, but it was missing characterization. There was no explanation for why they were so toxic his whole life, then no real explanation why they got nice all of a sudden.

curt6986curt6986almost 2 years ago

great story very hot nice job.

texlootexloo7 months ago

Silly and improbable, but not boring!

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2024-04-23: Dude fans -- your patience has been rewarded. #6 is queued to show up 4/25, #7 on 4/26, and cross your fingers that #8 is right behind. BTW, things are heating up with Sam/Emily/Lena, so I've moved the series from Mature to Incest/Taboo. The cheating is also a ...