All Comments on 'Alone'

I haven't seen my lover in a month so this story really hits home for me! Well done, very sexy story.

My man does a lot of travel too. I can only hope he dreams about me the same way the man in this story dreams about his love. Beautifully written.

Not very well developed. Pretty much amateur. Its pretty obvious this is your first time writing so I guess I can't be too terribly harsh on you. I can only hope that like most people you will learn from your mistakes here. Zero plot development and to be perfectly honest not that arousing. sorry to say it.

This piece seems to me to be intended more as an impression than a narrative, and I found it very erotic and quite successful on its own terms. I think it's lovely just as it is and I hope you'll keep writing.

This piece seems to me to be intended more as an impression than a narrative, and I found it very erotic and quite successful on its own terms. I think it's lovely just as it is and I hope you'll keep writing.

very well written, enjoyed the read. I'm in that dark-to-gray phase now, just starting to see my own mortality in the mirror, so that part struck a chord. Also kudos on the good technical (grammar/spelling), nothing to distract from the artistic vision and emotion. keep it up!