All Comments on 'Alone at Night'

What an excellent story! It is definitely a keeper! Great job!

OMG! This story was fucking hot. I hope to see more like this from you.

From Birmingham....Great story. I love you work!! Rock

i love the story keep it up and like to read more from you

Very sensual and hot. Showing her true desires

Thought this was brilliant! loved it!

The line where the intruder says he's "surprised" to find adult toys in her room is extremely unrealistic. Why shouldon't it be expected of an adult female..? Also, she became aroused too quickly in my opinion. I also really disliked the narration describing what was said instead of actually reading quotes from the characters themselves. "The man told her she was being a slut" is not as enticing as "fucking slut".

I didn't finish it so if things get cleared up later in the story then don't mind me. Also not trying to be offensive just offering honest feedback. I'm sure other people could enjoy it without issue, this is all just my own opinion. Keep practicing!