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by baseballace23
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Anonymousalmost 17 years agoNo I didn't
Never write in the second person. You immediately alienate half your potential audience.
"You come to the door, your 19 year old body looking absolutely amazing, wearing a black miniskirt and a white tank top."
No, I fucking didn't. I'm not 19 and I don't wear miniskirts.
I'm a guy.
Fuck off.
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