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Anonymousover 15 years agocheck your grammar
One who captures is a captor, not a captive. A captive is the person captured.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoSome grammar issues and use of passive voice.
It's a pretty hot pretext, but it needs a lot of revision and editing.
rjc36_usabout 3 years agoI enjoyed it and the thought of a lover going to those lengths to please you.
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