All Comments on 'Alone In The Park?'

I'm not too much into dom but this was a very hot story. I will look forward to reading more of your writing.

Thanks for the afternoon excitement!

This is not a bad story but it seems a little "one-sided" because the heroine pretty much gets taken advantage of and the "stranger" believes she will be back for more. I don't think this happens in real life and would have preferred to read the stranger was a friend playing a role. The male stranger is domineering and rather selfish or mean, and that's not a good sexy 'role-model' for younger male readers to be fantasizing over.

Great story. I have recently explored pee play in my writing too in my "Guilt" series and its lovely to get the female perspective on this. Have you ever thought of co-authoring?