All Comments on 'Alone with a Vampire'

That was remarkable, intense and vivid. It could have done without the full Renfield cliché and perhaps her immediate conclusion that she was dealing with a vampire. I think that at least until she’d see him do something unquestionably inhuman. The average person isn’t going to think vampires if they see random blood spot stains and inverted crosses. The first reaction is likely to be a weirdo pretending to be a vampire.

Honestly though they were two minor posts and didn’t overly detract from the story.

Tess (uk)

I enjoyed the story line but got distracted by the repetitive and excessive use of the word "body". It's fine not to name specific parts, but "into her", "throughout her", and many other "her"s would have been fine without the "body" qualifier. Flesh, exremities, skin, being - so many substitutes that could have been used, as well.

All that said, I still thank you for sharing. Many of the visuals were quite arousing.