All Comments on 'Alpha Bear on Campus Ch. 04'

Now I’m late for work but this fucking was coming for a long time: got me hard AF more plz

Glad I stumbled across this series, definitely need more ! Great work !

So hot. I want to read more about them as daddy trains him.

Loving this story. Hope you continue this story

Fucking amazing. You've done such a great job building up the tension over the last few chapters that you had me checking the site every day or updates! And damn it was good.

Yes, more is coming. If you couldn’t tell I was laying the seeds for some training coming, Dr Patterson, and of course Dean Parsons.

Also, I’m open for suggestions for the progression of the story. I have a loose map laid out but if you can think of a hot scene to have happen I love hearing from you. The

What a series!

This has been my favorite story since the multi part carny story someone wrote a few years back. President Mayis such a great fleshed out character. I also check the site every day waiting for the next installment and it almost killed me having to wait till after work so I could really enjoy it at home. Bravo.

I actually got really turned on reading this - President May is my fantasy daddy bear! Great stuff. The characters were well developed as I can hear May’s orders and growls. Well done and looking forward to this series continuing!

great story, great pacing, great characterizations.

two minor things:

- the phrase is "piqued my interest", not "peaked my interest"

- minor typo at the end: "Hee kept his rapid rhythm"

can't wait to read more.

Real good story

I have always liked older Hairy men.

Now I am older and I still like hairy men, I especially like having them tell me what to do

like John I am a sub,

thanks

can not wait to read more

Amazing! And the sex scene is believable which makes it even hotter!