All Comments on 'Alpha Killer Ch. 71-75'

Wow, that was savage! I thought this story was winding down and then you suddenly poured napalm on it and set it on fire.

can't wait for next installment love the storyline

If you weren't already one of my favorites this chapter would have made you so.

Partwolf, I have read all your stories, but I have to say these chapters had me on the edge of my seat holding my breath! Your ability to weave the stories as you have is greatly admired. Thank you for writing and sharing your work. I, for one, am highly appreciative to have your books to read.

OBS

Partwolf, I think this may your best story, to date! What's next?

PN

The last section is supposed to be Dusty's PoV. But it changes frequently between him and Erica. It gets really confusing. Otherwise this was a great chapter.

I didn't think it could get any better but it has..just brilliantly written!

Anxiously awaiting the next chapters..

I've read and re-read your stories several times and am always looking for your latest work. Thanks for sharing your story telling skills with us.

I must say this is my favorite story out of all your collection. I love Talia and her uniqueness along with Erica and Randall; but all of a sudden the hybrids aren’t special anymore. I like them being more powerful than the rest yet still remain incorruptible. Changing dusty seems forced where having him die would’ve added more emotional intensity to the victory against the vampires. Soon in this world a hybrid will become dime a dozen because all the remaining covens will want one in their family.

Really. "You know nothing john snow"?! Someone is a GoT fan!!

PLEASE get an editor!!!!

I did 3 read throughs of chapter 1 and couldn’t figure out which perspective you were aiming for.

Also as pro ‘woman warrior’ writer , they get docile pretty quick.

Maybe these strong ass females you write about dominate their partners, or you find an alpha female story that doesn’t need a mate.