All Comments on 'Alpha Male's Paradise'

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ThePonderingLizardThePonderingLizardalmost 5 years ago
Please write more!

Honestly one of the hottest stories I've ever read. You've got a whole world here and I'd love to see more of it :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

That feel when you're reading mind control pornography and the least realistic aspect is a utopia being brought about by having only women.

Well written though.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 4 years ago
Ka-Pow!

The last three paragraphs...

Fmdmlvr1992Fmdmlvr1992over 2 years ago

I really loved this story! My only complaint is that it felt too short. You built such a rich and beautiful and interesting world and I’d love to read more stories set in it :)

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