All Comments on 'Altering the Plans Ch. 08'

Great ending! One can never have too many friends.

5

Great wrap up of a gripping story

fantastic story. wonderful work. thank you so much for sharing your talents.

Good ending to a nice story, held my interest all the way through.

Awesome story, thanks for sharing your work. Looking forward to your next story.

5

Sorry to see it ending. Loved the story and the characters. Kept waiting for something bad to happen with Devlin - you set us up with that red herring. Thank you for sharing.

Great ending to a wonderful story -- 5 stars. Some loose ends, though. To me, this lays the groundwork for a couple of spinoffs, one focused on Krista and Devlin and another on Lacey and Jackson. Probably not full series like this one, but perhaps one story for each couple.

Wonderful.story

Very interesting story. Thank you.

Very good story.

So happy to see you back.

I always loved your stories,

Keep writing please.

Fabulous as always

Please write more of this more of this crowd.

Especially would be good to have some back story on Devlin, to explain why he acted in the manner to worry Maya, and then to continue on to see how he gets on with Krista.