All Comments on 'Alternate Dimensions Pt. 05'

I am truly enjoying every chapter. Very creative, fun, and sexy all at the same time. Love the explanation of the effects and everything. Hope to read more.

Don't know if I missed anything, but he should definitely surprise his friend with some anal play.

I just read all the chapters in a mini marathon, and am going to go right out and get some of those blasherberries! I know they make a guy's cum taste magical, but I am curious what they do to a girl when he cums inside her? Do I have to dimension jump myself to find out or are you going to tell us? Five small parts to your story garnered you twenty-five stars, at least from me. Nice job, JB

You need to write more please.

Awesome as usual for your stories. I do hope you continue this series.

Hope to see more of this story. Great read.

Really looking foreword to the next installment.

Great story. Really deserves more installments. It seems obvious the Blasherberrys need to make their way to our earth! A society adjusting to them would be ripe for good stories.

Anxiously awaiting the rest of this story. Would love to see some public settings with full blown sex.

That was a very well-told story. Looking forward for more parts. You should not leave us in the middle of this. Please tell the rest.

it's been a while. There should be more sequels and stories coming from you.

Loved it. What a great concept. Thanks for sharing.

And I wish you'd continue it. The balance between ridiculous and sci-fi and a hot, sexy story is great. I love how the relationship between Brad and Rebecca develops - even under the influence of blasherberry you can tell Rebecca is kinda interested in Brad. And will he ever come completely out of his shell? Will blasherberry be their ally or nemesis? Please consider continuing - I'd appreciate it.

All 5's on the five chapters. Thanks!

I think your works has been stolen and posted on Amazon thought you should know incase it wasn't you who did it contact me.If you don't contact me I'll try to inform Amazon my self.

https://www.amazon.com/Fourteenth-Dimension-Marcus-Clayton-ebook/dp/B08NWDWV8G/ref=mp_s_a_1_1?dchild=1&keywords=the+fourteenth+dimension&qid=1606982055&sr=8-1

Thanks for the heads up @chipmonk9. Yup, someone stole this and posted on Amazon Kindle. That's flattering, I suppose, but also pretty shitty. Hopefully, we resolve it soon. :)

Never would have guessed I'd enjoy this tale so much when I first clicked on it. Now that I'm through Ch5, I'm sad that there isn't more.

I think we need at least 100 chapters to fully explore the universe. What happens when they go home with their new friend? Is there a cumulative effect to the berry? Will our dear couple be turned into addicts whether they like it or not? Has the berry caused a permanent change to them? Is Brad now a natural producer of the good stuff and Rebecca going to need regular 'injections'? Will they continue to visit so Rebecca can travel to the new dimension for another fix?

Where's the rest? WHERE'S THE REST? WHERE. IS. THE. REST!? This is a great story with "Porn Logic that actually makes sense" and you're telling me it's an abandoned project!? Noooooooooooo

you lack the imagination to wright this. give it to somebody who can

I normally hate cum-eating and such, but i continued reading with curiosity and then i was just amused by the whole thing lol.