All Comments on 'Alternative Blowjobs Ch. 01'

...to me hardly sets up the neediness that seems to justify the incest. But otherwise a well written clever sexy little piece that I have a "5".

One of the best I've read in a long time!

Well written, with a fantastic twist of it being Jenna instead of her mom!

Please continue this story, because there is great potential here!

Good story. Well written and believable. I usually like build up and tension before the family members cross the line, but your setup made perfect sense. On to Chapter 2!

OMG you made me nut 100% HOT

***That was an interesting tidbit of an oral story. Thanks for sharing

gr8 start 100% HOT

Good premise.

But blowjob is too automatic. Lacks details. Simply stating a sex act happened doesn't make it erotic.

Three stars.

To the Anonymous critic below, put your name ir something other than “Anonymous”. Getting BJ from an eighteen year old is just that , a BJ. She has no fucking experience.

nycperv, short sweet and to the point with the reader knowing there’s more to cum. 4*