All Comments on 'Alternative Blowjobs Ch. 08'

You have to get mother and daughter together.

Good erotica gets you off and gives the viewer something else. Your chapters are too short and don't give the reader much new to work with. You could have condensed seven chapters into two or three and added some new scenarios and it would have been much better. It's a fun dynamic, but it's gone stale now.

The next chapter (#9) could be about how Barbara confesses to knowing about what's been going on between they step-daughter and the guy, and then chapter #10 about a consensual 3-some which starts when he catches mother & daughter eating each other out......

Tabootales is right on the point

The comments of this story are filled with entitled smut-junkies. If it is boring go watch pornhub lol.