by christa_p
That last scene with Paula was hot. Still not into girls?
I’m really looking forward to the next chapter now.
Come on Christa, this is good. I can't wait for the next chp. me thinks Paula maybe a little jealous of what happened between Sierra and char. Can't wait to see how all this plays out.
The next/final chapter will be pretty epic! Based on feedback from my other stories, I have a twist I think everyone will like.
This has been a great story from the beginning, but this chapter was sensational, the perfect balance between build-up and action.
Love the buildup and can't wait for the two of them to give in to each other. So beautifully written. As a fellow author, I admire your skill level. Very sensual and tender. Easy 5 stars. Hope there is more to come.
Christa, you are a very talented erotic storyteller. The build up has been perfect and the sexual tension between the girls has to culminate in passionate lovemaking. Looking forward to the next installment and really hoping for a happy ending. Five stars is a given.
My advice, Christy: Don't change your style too much based on moaners. Some of us are totally here for your "seducing straight girls by any means necessary" stories. It's freaking hot.
Ugh. It better be a great twist because this was boring. The only highlight is that doormat Jackson: devoid of any personality is gone. I know I will be in the minority but there is a point when building the climax becomes irritating.
Echo chambers aren't we all. You are the greatest thing since Anne Rice. (1984).
P.S. It was still boring.