All Comments on 'Always a Country Boy Ch. 02'

Your story is EXCELLENT, but you need to run the grammar checker on your word processor. The plot so far is very good, keep it up. The character interaction you write is good, and they are likable.

Shaping up to be a brokeback of a story. Read Annie Proux's short, its better than the movie. But I agree, you've got grammer and spelling errors which distract from the flow.

like the story idea but really need to work on your proof reading and grammer.