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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hmmm...

Eager for more. Glad there were no grammar or spelling errors. That's all I will say.

freakchickafreakchickaover 10 years agoAuthor
thanks

thanks for the feed back for my first story I would love to hear what you have to say second part will be up asap

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

That was really really good

Please update soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
loved it!

Really liked this story hope to have an update soon!! Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Cheers mate!

I enjoy writing with you and I am happy to be the chosen one.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 4 years ago
Um, wow.

I'm glad to see there are more chapters to this story. You captured the intensity well, and also the way such events can seem to skip from one bad moment to the next. Good writing.

Non-Human is the category, and hopefully the next chapter will produce the promised entity, however, this chapter (without the non-human) belongs in the Non-Consent/Reluctance category.

Please keep writing.

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just looking for fun with cool people. want to live life In the fast lane and never regret the choices I make. Just i guess looking to make friends and maybe find a connection with..

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