by freakchicka
Eager for more. Glad there were no grammar or spelling errors. That's all I will say.
thanks for the feed back for my first story I would love to hear what you have to say second part will be up asap
Really liked this story hope to have an update soon!! Keep up the good work!
I'm glad to see there are more chapters to this story. You captured the intensity well, and also the way such events can seem to skip from one bad moment to the next. Good writing.
Non-Human is the category, and hopefully the next chapter will produce the promised entity, however, this chapter (without the non-human) belongs in the Non-Consent/Reluctance category.
Please keep writing.