All Comments on 'Always in My Life Ch. 06'

if you're going to do a sequel for beth and jack... really want to know how that turns out.. maybe at edie's wedding? :)

I really enjoyed reading this one, and agree you need to continue the Beth and Jack story. Thanks for sharing your writing talents.

I too would like to see you write a squeal for those two hard heads.

But please write one for Beth and Jack. I would love to read more about all of the characters in your story. Thanks for a beautiful story!

Great story and great characters, you have some talent here.

Just really hope you do a side story to focus on Beth and Jack.

It's kind of a buzzkill that you leaves us hanging like that.

Besides that though, it was really good.

Thank you for writing this and hope you will continue. You have a nice style that I think will get better with time. The only suggestion I have comes from reading this series. You could have easily combined a couple of these parts as they seemed to flow together. And yes a Beth and Jack series with glimpses into Edie and Spencer's growing love would make a nice read.

I loved reading all six chapters and the only disappointment was the fact that there was nothing left to read. I wanted to keep reading. I found myself becoming attached to Edie, wanting to cheer and support her. One of my favorite authors is Nicholas Sparks, the author of The Notebook, Message in a Bottle, A Walk To Remember, etc. While I was reading the chapters I found myself comparing the author's style of writing to Nicholas Sparks. Very similar pertaining to the use of imagery, sexual tension without going over the top, and the overall feel of genuine , real love. I look forward to reading more stories on Lit from this author.

I can't believe it ended,I want more... :P lovely story. It was so touching and loving.Both Eddie and Spencer capture you. Well especially Spencer... ;) where can I find one???

But please tell me you are going to continue with Beth and Jack. there is just such chemistry... their relation is a volcano!!! I love it. Beth is a little mysterious... :P plus I really love Jack!!!

The script was alittle childish to me but I read the whole story and fell in love with Beth and Jack more. I really wanna know what happen the night she spent on the coach to have them able to stand each other.

that was an amazing story!

please say you are going to do one on beth and jack!

i liked the plot, although a little too much was left unexplained like jack and beth. i think my only problem with it was there wasn't enough depth in the characters for a story that serious.

did enjoy reading it though, and great first try :)

I am trying to be patient and I believe so do others, but you' re not helping the situation at all. I 've been waiting for a sequel on Jack and Beth for... I' ve lost count. Please don't disappoint us. Your people is expecting mooooorreee!!!! ;)

Write more please

Ah come on you cant leave hanging. You need to tell Beth and Jack's story.

Liked this story a lot. Am a bit disappointed that the side story with her sister and his best friend wasn't explored more.

A fine story, getting over her harrowing expiriece to find love, romantic.

Perhaps you could write a New story: how she helps her sister find love.

A perfect ending!!! Amazon story. I truly loved how patient and sweet Spencer was with Edie.