All Comments on 'Always in my mind'

I, for one, wouldn't mind seeing this continued. I enjoyed the story, good plot and characters. A few uncaught errors there, a good proofing should have caught them. And some of the metaphors and descriptions were either over the top or just overly awkward. The girls had enough drama, it didn't need injected into every description of a body part or body shift. But a good start.

Each of your pieces, as promised, is a passionate “soul searching romance” yet each unique — uniquely interesting women within uniquely different setting/storylines. Each erotically charged (understatement), but in a different way. The intensely passionate moments reveal, tell us much about the relationship and the players. And while you bring the story to a close you always leave open the possibilities — that may be frustrating to some, but I like the simmering tease of what might be. Yes, I would love to see where Devvon and Jessica go with their relationship and whether the past interferes with the present for Robyn and Emily and so on, but your call, of course. Very creative writing.