All Comments on 'Always Second Best'

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Ew

Complete and total bollucks even for a fictional tale. 0 stars.

Every story released today has been a cuckold or cuckold and interracial. I can't believe the number of sick twisted minds that get off on this crap. - 1☆

Usually I try to suggest improvements... I can't think of any thing that could be done to raise this from a 1* to even a 2*.. A real waste of time.

Yuk!

No clue when u went from an ok writer to this cuck shit?? What happens COVID took ur balls??

Seems like this…each line was punier then the one before..

Are u SRO ding your last days eating cream pies daily?? Seems to be!!

VOmit totally!! How does a sick fuck like u even live ?? There really needs to be some cutting up of ur brain to see if it so filled with maggots!! Maybe we will know the answer then?? Actullay the thought taht putrid crap like u intermingle in our society and walk amongst us and our kids makes me angry!!

Reading your bio just to know what causes a supposedly ex athlete and husband and parent to write such crap??

Were u actually an athelete or a male massage Boi to atheletes?? You feel totally gay through ur writings? Does ur wife know that she is the beard in your marriage?? Are the kids urs? Are u able to get it up to fuck a woman?? Or did she fuck others to get kids??

From you stories and as there is no smoke without a fire …I can only assume u actually are a gay favor who loves to suck cock!

your story was very good . Jake wasnt a cuck , not like the little girls who really like that shit try and write

just another cuck story with a slut wife poor

Thanks for the tags 1 star given without reading hopefully they all died in a plane crash.

Nasty and not erotic.

take out the cuckolding and this would be a pretty good story

Yes, I forced myself to read it. Your writing ability has always been good. The story though....

I was wondering how someone could be such a doormat and be so weak and pathetic. Plus, how the pathetic arsehole could actually allow his cheating slut wife to do whatever she damn well wants to, with cuck boy just standing aside.

Why didn't Mark drug Jake's drink when he was ordered around like a submissive slave? Then tied the dick up and fucked him with the biggest dildo he could get his hands on. Perhaps taking photos and a video as well. Doing SOMETHING instead of allowing Jake to just fuck his cheating wife whenever he wanted. Plus, why did cuck boy not assert himself and bring some woman into the relationship with his slut wife. When she tried to stop Mark from having sex with Mary... wow. Weak, pathetic boy did nothing until Jake "forced" Daisy to share.

Just ridiculous. Yes, I know there are a lot of cucks that will love this story. Oh well.

I laughed like hell when reading the intro. My paraphrase, "If you don't like this theme you should read one of the other well written stories." If the story is that abhorrent to the average person that you must warn others simply put it in fetish where it belongs.

Talk about delusional, as if to say your submission is a, "well written story." After reading the tags I couldn't wait to give it one star. You need mental help.

Feels like there was a missed opportunity. With Mark fucking Mary and Daisy being jealous and not wanting him to. After they returned to their rooms there could have been a very intense and in depth conversation. Maybe now that Daisy knows how Mark has felt all this time she can finally put all the coping techniques she learned in counseling to use and combined with her jealousy at seeing Mark fuck another woman she can finally break her addiction to Jake.

Honestly this story probably should have ended with Jake taking Daisy away from Mark for good and him having to live with the fact that he enabled it because he's a dumb ass.

Just another sissy wimp and cheating slut wife, both delusional about love. Why not take it all the way and have little Marky boi be Jake's whore as well?

Bury them all at the tip.

If you do not approve of readers give you their honest rating, either grow a fucking brain and post your crap in a category where it might be appreciated or, better yet, just don't post your worthless word vomit. It's not our fault that you are a worthless idiot.

I bailed after two pages of backstory. You literally could have taken care of the exposition in a couple of sentences.

As a story it portrayed the submissive personality well, which didn't in any way make me like the plot. The psychology of dom/sub relationships is as varied as each individual person involved, which allows for an infinite number of stories to express the nuance of those parties. While a fan of such stories, I recognize that I will not enjoy many which appear on Literotica.--which doesn't mean that I can't recognize good writing when I read it.

This one was good, just not particularly to my taste. Thanks for sharing your creative imagination and talent with us. Keep writing.

MLJ

Meh.

Willingly submissive beta male stories just don't excite me in the least

Very entertaining. Many good girls get to the age and just as horney as a guy but get more attention if beautiful only see the most popular guys and get their first taste of getting fucked . Guys will fuck any hole available Girls usually more selective but some become cock hungry whores . A small few will even be similar as being ordered around. As a guy he lost his best friend then girlfriend before he even had a chance to fuck her. Me after that high school where she went with the pretty boy star and used the final dance as an excuse. Her personality she would eventually being cheating on him anyway . He was better off as friends with benefits . He’d never be one , she may love him , even like fucking him but that other guy is always better in her eyes. Me personally I’d have made it my dying desire to hurt him somehow. Probably a broken knee cap or smashed up throwing hand . Three girls way back always wanted the most popular guys so one hooked up with the top football player and he took two other friends. The three guys two bing black arrogant three hundred pound offense line guys and him qb. Passed these three girls around for the whole summer like they were paid hookers . At a huge party they openly fucked them with doors open for all to see . The two big guys yelling look at the pretty white bitched taking the black cocks JP there asses . High giving everyone that passed. The three could never date a guy from around who knew the stories

Should have read the authors comments not my kind of story . These anonymous comments that are critical of a story should not be acknowledged without a name

The best part of the story was when the white boy made the black boys blush. 100 stars!

Do not get me wrong, I read your content warning but there’s something completely flawed in this story. The guy that is usually 2nd best QB is also an Alpha and I doubt he would let his wife being a sex slave to another…if he would not have married and with no kids in the equation, a FWB arrangement would be more plausible and the best such a guy would probably accept as she could technically fuck others without having to explain herself too much.

Can't believe I wasted my time getting to the end of this, MC was a wimp, wife a slut, not only that, it was boring

Yuk!

A cuckold story on valentine day this site is very classic and people wonder why the suicide rate is soo high this time of year

A man with no pride doesn't make for a great plot. Try giving your character some backbone. Just saying.

Not much of a hero!

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I really liked the story! I was hoping that after Mark and Daisy got back together and married that Daisy would cuckold Mark with BBC and make hubby cleanup her sloppy creampie! Five stars.

While Jake's putting in to Daisy, swing a 24" pipe wrench to the side of his knee as if you were swinging for the fences. Tell a jury of your peers, "Man, I just snapped! They were blackmailing me, making me watch, but I couldn't go along with it." There will always be 1, maybe 2, righteous dudes who hate entitled jocks and cheating wives. After the third or fourth hung jury, the charges will be dropped.

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Cuck writers can't understand why people hate these stories so much. It's because nothing redeems the MC in the reader's mind. He's unsympathetic, beholden only to a mental illness or a fetish that is anathema to 99.9% of men. That's why these stories need to be in "fetish".

Another pussy cuck author with a tough guy pen name. He be more like Gecko1951.

6 pages of nothing worth to read. * for this1 because I could not give you

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Jake should have ordered Mark to suck him off, swallow his cock then his cum.

All cucks are disgusting.

Well that coulda turned out ok but it turned into a big turd. If Jake were real, his man card is gone, fall on the sword like the willing cuck u are.

Never could have made it back after the lying and cheating. Dump the cheating bitch.

Even down to the cliche blowing ones knee out in Canada and becoming a worthless football coach. Damn, I think every cliche was used in the 52 card deck. Yikes!

The comments are ridiculous. The author gives a warning at the start of the story, yet you still decided to read it. I admit I'm not a fan of cuckold stories/fantasies, so I didn't like this but I gave it a chance due this authors stories which I liked.

cuck rubbish put it in the correct category

Today is obviously the day for weird racist submissions to the LW category.

Started strong, with lots if potential drama then just Petered out

I thought it was very well written, heartbreaking at times and yet they were able to find a way to be together. I think the thing for me is that ultimately she well and truly “cheated”. I appreciate you sharing the themes at the beginning of the story. I don’t know why people get so butthurt about Cuckolding stories. You literally stated that this was that kind of story at the beginning.

Again for me, it definitely had it’s sexy moments, but for me, when she well and truly went behind her husband’s back, that’s when this story went beyond what I enjoy personally.

Those "big" footballers will certainly need a lot of "protection" when playing!

Cuck

started out as an interesting story though very familiar. Ended up as just a wanker with no story at all. MC was not worthy of being a man. Going behind his back was enough for me to make a stand. Agree with patillie

@Luckyguy1965 - People who post under a fake name with an empty profile should not throw stones at anonymous people lest they realize they were looking in a mirror...

As it is usually the case with this type of effort... the comments left here are WAY more entertaining & interesting than the story itself.

"If the story is that abhorrent to the average person that you must warn others simply put it in fetish where it belongs."

"If you do not approve of readers give you their honest rating, (...) post your crap in a category where it might be appreciated..."

Preach, anons. Preach

Fetish exists. Interracial Love exists. That is all I need to say...

…and then say “it’s cool, let’s do it together.” That’s difficult to reconcile. Well written though, and though I can’t reconcile those two parts of the story, they are good!

Thanks for writing!

If I'm second best or she can't control herself I'm history children or not.

If you like wife sharing erotica, this fits the bill. If you don't, then leave this one alone.

Think I would've shot both of them!

Great story! Very well written and exciting. Thanks for sharing it.

The story does what it sets out to do, but oh god I cannot help but detest Daisy, the guy should have ran as soon as he saw her again

I found the story generally very erotic, except that the focus on 'second-place' humiliation was kept very vague. I did find Daisy's addictive nature very hot, I must admit. That said, holy-hell, did this need a proofreading. Nearly every paragraph was rife with distracting errors. Please care enough about your readers to check your work. Thanks.

Could have been hot but the “addiction” part always screws up gator’s stories. It’s like it’s used to somehow make the women seem better than they are. They are really just complete sluts no addiction involved. I’m sure any old big dick would have them act like they’re true selves.

I would love to see a version where he refused to put his dick in her. Just to see the drama. What would happened? I wish I was talented enough to write

I don't actually mind stories about sharing, or even cuckolding (sometimes, gots be to alot of love and affection), but this girl was a real piece of work.

Way out story. The husband here is the most pitiful piece of shit in the world. Too bad Jake didn't make him suck his dick. As for Daisey, maybe Jake could take her downtown and have her hook on the corner and give him the money. Even better, he could get a donkey and have her fuck it on stage. She really needs to have someone stick a Louisville slugger up her cunt until it comes out of her mouth.